aww! I love it!

Ah... What?

Some of these comparisons are understandable but others are just random.

Ah... What?

Some of these comparisons are understandable but others are just random.

This is one of the good poems that I've read on Fanfiction. I hope you write some more like this, don't forget to make sure your clear on how you put your words, i got a little confused in the poem about what you were talking about, but i grasped the objective anyways. There really isn't anything wrong with this, fits it's rate, good grammer, love poem. More for a couple then for friends, might want to note that for the summary. Anyways, cute for a poem. Sweet for your friends. Not too shabby for one poem.

i am so sick of people posting random stuff that isn't fanfiction. this has nothing to do with the book, it's just some nonsense you wrote for your friends. how dare you be arrogant enough to write that it's a terrific poem in the summary, it's mediocre and badly written!

I bet this poem is lonely, being the only thing under Year of the Secret Assignments.

Ironically, I just finished that book. -holds up book for proof- After being uberly frustrated at the Australian arsehole by the name of Paul. If all goes as planned, this won't be lonely for long.

-is planning a oneshot about book-

Yeah, anyway, I loved this poem. Awesome. Very inspiring and pretty much everything everyone else said.

Skits!

so sweet!

WOW!

I LOVED THIS!

great poem i like it

This is so wonderful!

A very inspiring poem. I'm really glad there's finally a section for this book.

I love it

:D

This poem is beautiful.

Does it get lonely being the only one doing the Year of Secret Assignments?

awesome poem...

hey this is the book about the letters between ashbury and brookfield right? with cass, lyd, and em?

just curious :)

This is an insightful poem that has a common rhyme scheme and which is full of imagery. It also makes the reader think; for instance, in "the frosting on my cupcake", the narrator might be alluding to the sweetness of the frosting, or perhaps the surprisingly bitter richness it brings (not to make this a sour poem). The "teddy bear", as well as the "glasses... that give me sight" create a friendly, harmonious air and reflect a strong friendship. The "secret love letters" indicate a deeper love than friendship, which perhaps can be supported by "in my dreams" and "makes my day". Furthermore, this is a simple poem with great meaning and an interesting amount of symbolism and a great deal of imagery.

Cute. There were a few grammatical usage errors that I would go back and fix.