Reviews for The Game of Life Part Two
justamomentofclarity 4/29/09 . chapter 35
cute! altho i coulnd't figure out, why was jules tossing and turning?
OceanSapphire 4/29/09 . chapter 35
Great chapter! Did you notice that you called Olivia Molly twice in the last section? Didn't distract from the reading but I thought I'd tell you. Great chapter otherwise.

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OceanSapphire 4/28/09 . chapter 34
Great chapter! I love how Molly switched seats and how Olivia not-so-subtlety changed topics! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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OceanSapphire 4/26/09 . chapter 33
Not really a cliffhanger...but a really great chapter! I'm glad Olivia finally told someone what happened to her.

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iheartflashpoint 4/26/09 . chapter 33
I loved it!
OceanSapphire 4/26/09 . chapter 32
Aww! Wordy's daughter was so cute! And I love how you had Lukas and Bella's part! And how Molly is trying to talk Olivia into talking/going out with Lou.

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justamomentofclarity 4/26/09 . chapter 32
aww yay! wedding chapters! this one was really good.
iheartflashpoint 4/26/09 . chapter 32
I loved it! I WANT MORE CHAPTERS! hahaha. oh and her going back haha. thats so cute!
justamomentofclarity 4/26/09 . chapter 31
wow two updates in one day! impressive! good job
OceanSapphire 4/26/09 . chapter 31
Awesome! You really are churning out the chapters today, aren't you? Lukas and Bella was so cute! And I like how Olivia is still resisiting pretty much anything to do with Lou.

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iheartflashpoint 4/26/09 . chapter 31
10 parts... dang! I CANT WAIT UNTIL THEY ARE GETTING MARRIED! you have done a lot of psoting today! I LOVE IT! keep them coming!
justamomentofclarity 4/26/09 . chapter 30
cute,

cant wait for sam/jules wedding! and in a week she'll be back for good! YES
OceanSapphire 4/26/09 . chapter 30
Aw! That was so sweet! I really, really loved how you did that chapter! The slight break with S/J and Molly was also well placed.

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OceanSapphire 4/26/09 . chapter 29
To Italy! Really great chapter, as always you manage to flow between parts amazingly! The baby was so cute! Can't wait for the next (30th!) chapter!

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OceanSapphire 4/24/09 . chapter 28
So that's why! It was really well written and I get what you meant about 'Game of Life Part 1' but not about Thanksgiving. Poor Lou and Olivia, they never catch any breaks!

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