Reviews for Dark Destiny Revised
Getsuga Tensou 3/17/09 . chapter 4
interesting story, though you treatment of sakura(eventhough i like it) is a bit on the exagerated side, please do continue
I'm Solo 3/17/09 . chapter 4
is this a harem fic? just wondering...
Fox-Sama 3/16/09 . chapter 2
real nice chapter I love how this is playing out please keep it up
Kingkakashi 3/16/09 . chapter 2
Good chapter, I liked the little development you got started between Naruto and Ino. It should prove interesting to see what the pink banshee will think about the two of them later on. I look forward to the next update, and keep up the great work.
I'm Solo 3/16/09 . chapter 2
lol...even tho i never read the first one this is good
Fox-Sama 3/13/09 . chapter 1
not bad I like this, but the chapter could be a bit longer
Kingkakashi 3/13/09 . chapter 1
I like the revision so far. I wonder what soul and heart crushing thing Sakura said to Naruto this time? He needs to drop her like a bad habit. All or the Konoha 12 should. Keep up the great work.
I'm Solo 3/13/09 . chapter 1
LOL! they ran and left him there with her...funny as hell

i can only shudder tot think what will happen when she wakes up and sees him there with her...(poor bastard going to get the beating of a lifetime)

New story eh?...looks good so far tho from the summary it's going to be semi-dark?
lindon2 3/13/09 . chapter 1
good fic
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