OMG! couldn't he just offer to hold the baby so she could eat, geez! good chapter
Micelle

I am completely overcome and twitterpated by this story of love. Absolutely impatient for the next chapter.

I always adore a cameward dominant jealous over protective...less than a week and he is already calling JC his and Bella too!

I love the banter. Emo Edward is okay, but sparky Edward/Bella is fun.

OK, I tried to leave this review last night but my internet connection died :o(
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your Edward! Seriously, he's my favorite Edward on fanfiction! Just the perfect mix of sweetness, possessiveness, protectiveness, jealousy, dominance (that one's near and dear to my heart!), devotion, formerly-**-up-edness... lol. yeah. I WANT HIM. Plus, a guy that can quote Jane Austen like that . . . DAMN that's SEXY!

OHMYGOD. Is it MIKE NEWTON??! That would be PERFECT! Seriously. lol. Newton, the obsessed serial rapist/murderer. (And no, I'm not making fun of the idea. I seriously think that would be awesome. No, wait, that sounded messed up, didn't it? Serial killers aren't awesome . . . I think I'll quit while I'm behind ;o) )

Luv the story! PLZ update soon!

I wanted to see when you were going to update your story. I love this story the most and I hope you can do it soon! WE ALL MISS U!

I loved how he tried to make things right at the end by quoting Mr. Darcy... and might I add that I am a fan of the citrus! ;) can't wait to see what you have planned for this crazy pair that seems to just jump head first into things as I can sense that there is still much to anticipate ahead, especially with both parental sides conveniently out of town! ;)

there definitely were lots of surprises... I am glad that they truth came out in whatever manner you could cook up... I know edward had some hurtful things to say but he did explain how hurt he was just at the thought of her keeping things from him and the possibility that he could lose her... can't wait to see what bella has to say about his idea! ;)

hm... I wonder who the chief has been conversing with, how he is in the know, and what business he has out of town... I am glad that he could tell how serious edward is about bella... the chief really let on that he knows more with his comment about bella acting without thinking of all of the consequences... despite the circumstances, I like that james and edward have found something that they have in common that will hopefully help to fix things between them and lastly, can't wait to see how bella handles this as edward realizes that she is definitely hiding more than he might have thought! ;)

dinner was entertaining as promised with all of their antics... I bet there would be more healthy relationships if they could handle domestic things like putting a baby to bed in that manner! ;)

you definitely had to know that james and edward would not see eye to eye... I love that edward and bella can't seem to control themselves and I can't wait to see how this dinner will be with this very unexpected guest! :)

I loved the cute boyfriend/girlfriend thing... hm, I wonder who victoria met on the plane? ;) also, I am thinking that the creepy feeling edward and jasper had about a certain someone might relate to the case charlie is involved in... can't wait to see who edward's attacker is, I am thinking or hoping it is her protective friend and he did not appreciate what edward was doing, even if he didn't mean any harm!

ok, I am back to reading, had a christmas party yesterday... I love how supportive edward is being with looking out for her and jc but I guess his earlier comment is catching up with him... can't wait to read that conversation! ;)

It is good that she now has a few supporters who are in the know... jasper is such a good guy for looking out for bella especially where edward is concerned but he also is giving edward a chance to prove himself and even offered advice... can't wait to read how the chief reacts!