Holy Shyte Balls! This kids doesn't waste ANY time, does he?

I love that you quoted from Pride and Prejudice.

Their parents are going to FREAK OUT! They've known each other

for what? Six or seven weeks? They've been "together" for like

five minutes? Oh my!

It's funny how that is such a sweet and meaningful gesture

in the La-La Land of FFN, but in reality, it would be a

HORRIBLE idea! I know that in this reality, Edward and

Bella "belong" together, and always have their HEA... but

in real life, that could cause SO amny problems for them

both!... *steps down from her soap box*

Ahem... now for the more "appropriate" response...

Wow! Edward is such a great guy! He is going to solve the

issue for them both! he will adopt JC, making hiin an

official Cullen, and this will bind Bella to him for

eternity, and ALL will be roses! LOL

geez! It's usually Bella that ends up needing stitches! LOL

I hope that he hasn't ruined his football season with this!

I wonder if the gingerbread leaf symbolizes JC.. I am really

beginning to suspect that the Unsub is Mike.

Charlie TOTALLY tipped his hand with that "Ta- er James"

slip up. HE is the problem with the adoption. I sure do

hope he doesn't think he is going to put a stop to it.

I am eager to learn more about what is going on with Tanya.

Something seems off. She isn't going to try to take JC from

Bella, is she? Oh, my!

The lemonade sips are pretty, uh... refreshing LOL

James needs o back off of Edward, and not assume the worst

of him... and I am not really happy with Jasper for telling

James all about Edward's past... Cause, really? He IS his

girlfriend's brother, and I am surprised that Alice isn't

upset about that.

Well, that's one HELLUVA introduction for Edward and James!

Oi vey! I think it's great that they are moing forward.

The killer isn't Newton, is it?

Oh, and BTW... I LOVE lemons! 3;D Keep 'em coming!

"...when first we pactice to deceive" LOL

Oh, Jerkward, you are going to rue the day!

She is NOT going to take him claiming HER

"son" very well at all!

I am really getting eager for the point at

which he discovers the truth!

Okay, so first of all.. I feel for Edward, seeing all the

competition he is going to have to deal with at school...

Kind of an eye-opening experience for him, I am sure. But

then, Bella is going to be good for him, because THIS

Bella is going to be NO MAN'S doormat! He is going to have

to learn to balance his desire to be there to meet her

needs with HER need to be independant...

Then, I feel for Bella... poor girl doesn't stand a chance

at getting to know a whole lot of people around, because

PossessWard is going to make it difficult. She needs room

to freaking breathe! LOL

And then.. I feel for Charlie! He is already struggling

with the idea that his daughter is a teenaged mom, and

getting to know her again, as well as his "grandson",

and he is trying to be good to them both, but now the ONE

request he has made of her is already for all intents and

purposes ignored! *sigh*

"Oh, what a tangled web we weave..."

So she knows Jazz? Hmm... how does he play into this?

I love these instant attaction stories! LOL

hmmm... I have a "thing" for Domward! ;)

He is really becoming both posessive and

protective of her! Yikes... both good

and bad.. I mean, she's likely to freak

the heck out when she learns that he is

claiming both HER and HER SON!

I think that Edward has proven that he has a softer side..

but by his own admission in the second chapter, he is a

manwhore! He needs to prove that he cares for Bella and

JC before I trust him. Just being nice isn't enough! ;)

Holy Shyte balls!

These two are really brazen! I hope that with

Edward's history that he has been keeping it

wrapped, because Virgin Mother Swan is BOLD,

and I am beginning to think that these two are

not going to take long before they are tearing

each other's clothes off, and maybe makina a

REAL "situation" for them BOTH to deal with!

I am so glad that Charlie welcomed Bella and JC!

That makes me feel better... and Esme is (as ever)

a sweetheart! And Edward is STILL an ass. Grr...

Wow. Just... Holy Wow! Edward is a real schmuck!

How can they POSSILBY end up together? I mean,

he is a self-absorbed man whore extrardinaire!

I am eager to see how you soften this asshole.

James is a really great guy in this story! An a nice Tanya?

I never would have thunk it! LOL ;)

Bella is always so brave and selfless! Adopting her brother

so that she can keep him near. Why do I get the feeling that

I am going to HATE Carlie? :(