aw, Don and Charlie are SO sweet...;)

An interesting snippet, but it seems incomplete. No matter how short, stories should, in my opinion, have a beginning, middle, and end. This is all beginning and middle, but lacks a needed sense of closure.

Beth

Gee whiz, that's not long enough to really form an opinion of whether I like it or not. The premise is
great but can't you flesh it out a bit more . . . or
even a lot more?

very sweet