D'aw. :D
Ish cute! Not marta's part. The end was just too cute. X3 Good job!

marta...is so...creepy...

I'm just Emil can help in more way than one =D Okay,I shut up. Just let me say that your story is really really great x3
I've never been a fan of Marta,but after stealing a kiss from Ratatosk... I think I might start to hate her xD (Ratatosk is Emil's only è.é)

Oh **, my mind went straight to the gutter . . .

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Ahh.. The thoughts of what transpired after that. X3 I love you so much more now. :D

Lesse here... No spelling errors from what I can see... Sentence structure... No mistakes there...

Although, your story makes me slightly more murderous towards Marta. Not that I liked her in the first place. XD Although, I believe Ratatosk would've thrown Marta off of him, or beat her to a bloody pulp before he let her kiss him... Ah well, all ICness for the sake of fluff.

You did well(*Cough*Understatement*Cough*). I must now find a way to get a hold of the printer so I can print this out and have delightful fantasies throughout school.

:3

-kills Marta- I just beat the game again like 10mins ago. She's so full of herself.