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Loaded Dice
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
This is the only fanfic I've read multiple times.
When I first found it, I stayed up all night reading it.
It's incredible, and Justin and Alex are always so in character. You are an amazing writer; I always feel for them and this is the fanfic that really got me interested in this ship.
But since it was the first, all other Jalex fanfics seem lacking in comparison. :)
42nd Blackbone
2009-11-21 . chapter 12
This was beautiful and I'm almost crying. This 12 chapters were so wonderfully written.. I really can't find the right words. You're a great author and I mean that. This is such a heartbreaking, beautiful love story.. I don't remember many stories that left me that speechless. Oh my... you really got me stunned.
JOVE
2009-11-20 . chapter 12
This was one of the most heartfelt stories I've read based on Justin and Alex. The words written on their emotional turmoil made these two very believable and realistic. You took this controversial theme and whirled it into something more than just most Jalaex fics out there because you've touched on the consequences, morals, etc. I've enjoyed every single chapter that have taken me up and down this anguished roller-coaster and appreciate the cleverness of the past/present/future moments...which overall connected so fluidly. Brava! I'm guessing Justin's powers will be gone now since he 'finally' chose to be with his 'one true love'. . ?
fanficfan78
2009-11-13 . chapter 12
Finally signed up and had to let you know how much I love this story. It's the first Jalex story I ever read and the whole reason I fell in love with the pairing. Your writing is so powerful and you bring Alex and Justin to life.
Felling
2009-11-01 . chapter 12
Ah. Not only was I crying at the end of the story, you made me cry worse with that song. Thank-you though, for the wonderful fic. : D
brookeormian
2009-10-30 . chapter 12
I must admit, I was getting a little worried that this wouldn't have a happy ending. I'm not too good with fics that don't have happy endings.

But this didn't disappoint. 12 chapters of fantastic story. Thank you so much for writing it!
DarkBitch08
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
this was so beautiful :)
Chaos Dragon
2009-10-01 . chapter 12
damn. just wow. this was good. very good. don't even remember how i flipped over to this fic but i'm so glad i did. i also have to admit wanting to throttle you for quite a few chapters. i wanted to know desperately what happened in 2012 that screwed everything up. but this was really good. going to peruse your gallery now...

~cd
justawritier
2009-09-19 . chapter 12
Wow! what a story. It was incerbidly writtien. I loved how you showed that them being together was a big deal unlike other stories i've read which made it even more heartbreaking to read.
anditgoeslike
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
honestly I come here to re-read and sob over this because this is just too good.
lilsweetypye
2009-09-13 . chapter 12
I have a question? If Justin is the family wizard how could he have married 3 non wizards? and how come harper isn't in the story?
Other than those two things i love it! thanks for writing it. I love your style of writing :D
itsi3
2009-09-09 . chapter 12
Awsome story! I Loved it!!
~Crystal
ponderer
2009-09-04 . chapter 12
Um, I adored this.

It was oh so wrong, not so right at all (but it was but it wasn't). Seriously, yo.

You know your stuff.
The Brat Prince
2009-09-01 . chapter 12
Wow, that took me like two days to read- and I'm a fast reader- just because I had to go back and reread some lines eighty times because they were so darn beautiful. I think my favorite part about this fic was the beginning with the split years, and how you could see the innocence/tragedy contrast. It was lovely. I also liked how you managed to keep the wizardry; not as a after thought, but not as a central part of the story, either.

This entire thing was such a roller coaster ride, up and down, and up and down. The thing was, I wasn't a huge fan of the last two chapters- chapter eleven because I thought there would be a happy ending (I was glad when there wasn't) and then chapter twelve because there was a happy ending; one that made me slightly uncomfortable. And the thing is, I think part of the allure of reading most jalex fics is that they don't make me squeamish or uncomfortable- they're just taboo, much like slash fics. There's a point in this rambling, which is that the fact that the ending made me feel a little weird is kind of AWESOME- I think it really drove home that the whole tragic love thing in real life would be like that-not just angst and longing, but awkwardness and discomfort and real sacrifice and a hard as hell life, but one founded on that choice to be together. In that sense, the ending was ideal. I have no idea if that's what you were going for, but either way, it works beautifully.

Back to the rest of the fic; I loved the insertion of the quotes, and the movement from city to city that made everything seem closer to reality. And of course, the emotion flowing throughout the entire thing was epic. I don't know, I think I just loved everything. Spectacular! You are an amazing, astounding, awe-inspiring writer, and I'm totally going to go troll through your profile and see what else you've got to offer. :)
vblum12
2009-08-31 . chapter 12
this was fantastic - you're very talented
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