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RedWingedAngel002
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Love itXD

Ari chan
Gemaster
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
It's an interesting conversation they're having, but it's hard to understand. I can't tell who is talking. Maybe after a person finishes speaking you could say "said Munto" or "Ichiko said". Also where are they? I think they're somewhere in the heavens but I can't tell where.I like the way you describe their voices and expressions. It's detailed and it makes the characters seem real. I also like how you portrayed the emotions. I hope this is helpful.
Kit-4ever2004
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
You just can't leave it there right? Haha~

Even I find Ichiko and Takashi a bit weird to be lover... But considering this two... Hmm... This might get interesting... ^^
Mixed-Colors
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
"Lolwut?" This was a wonderful little surprise. I found it funny when I thought I was reading about an angsty Yumemi but no... it's Ichiko! Oh, the irony! (Is that even the right word here?)

I won't say I haven't considered Ichiko X Rui, it would be funny, indeed. Maybe one day... they'll happen to meet in the anime.

Your one-shots are wonderful, thanks for taking the time to write them.
Nayuki bunny-chan
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
OMG. WOAHZ. I SO DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. but I loved, loved, loved it! now this idea isn't leaving my head... keep up these oneshots, I can't get enough XDD
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