 Ryuketsu no Hana 3/28/10 . chapter 1no tengo palabras para expresar lo mucho q me gusta xDD |
 Who is Rui 1/6/10 . chapter 1 I can't remember witch charter Rui is in the movie. Is he the knight that caries Yumemi? |
 RedWingedAngel002 9/27/09 . chapter 1Love itXD
Ari chan |
 Gemaster 9/5/09 . chapter 1It's an interesting conversation they're having, but it's hard to understand. I can't tell who is talking. Maybe after a person finishes speaking you could say "said Munto" or "Ichiko said". Also where are they? I think they're somewhere in the heavens but I can't tell where.I like the way you describe their voices and expressions. It's detailed and it makes the characters seem real. I also like how you portrayed the emotions. I hope this is helpful. |
 Kit-4ever2004 3/17/09 . chapter 1You just can't leave it there right? Haha
Even I find Ichiko and Takashi a bit weird to be lover... But considering this two... Hmm... This might get interesting... |
 Mixed-Colors 3/13/09 . chapter 1"Lolwut?" This was a wonderful little surprise. I found it funny when I thought I was reading about an angsty Yumemi but no... it's Ichiko! Oh, the irony! (Is that even the right word here?)
I won't say I haven't considered Ichiko X Rui, it would be funny, indeed. Maybe one day... they'll happen to meet in the anime.
Your one-shots are wonderful, thanks for taking the time to write them. |
 Nayuki-Bunny 3/13/09 . chapter 1OMG. WOAHZ. I SO DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. but I loved, loved, loved it! now this idea isn't leaving my head... keep up these oneshots, I can't get enough XDD |