A great story. Very good.

*jumps in an excited, happy manner*

Yes. Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! Somebody wrote a Holtz fic! *falls to her knees and begins to utterly worship Drucilla* Thankyouthankyouthankyou. And yes, you should so make it into a fic. *sigh* Holtz is officially the best nonevil villian ever to grace the BtVS/Angel world. *Jumps again* YAY!

Yes, this story has a lot of potential. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I really enjoyed it. I can't help but like poor Holtz, and I'm not as crazy about Angel as other readers are (I'm a Lindsey-holic!).

Wow. That's really wonderful. I like what you've done with no only his character but the mysterious Black Rose you've added as well. I hope you do continue with this idea. :]

This is great! Just the sort of kick in the head Holtz needs to get. And the Black Rose character is a great concept. Black Rose chronicles would be an interesting idea, visiting the different characters with the messages I'm sure so many viewers are screaming at their sets each week.

Like the idea of Black Rose Chronicles - a great character! Like to see her 'appear' to other characters too, but nice handling of the choices before Holtz. Vengence is cold & empty - that quote summed it up!