This is so amazing! It's the third or fourth time I read this story. I'm pretty sure I've already reviewed once, but I just can't help it. SPOILER ALERT! I just feel like crying even more, cause I know that this can never happen now that he's dead. RIP Hyuuga Neji. :'(

Beautiful! It's one of my favorite fics! I love the way they are so in character. You can write Tenten and Neji really well. For me, the best part was: "because Neji is asking her to 'stop', meaning 'please,' meaning 'don't leave me'."
I actually had to re-read it because it was so great. Keep on writing! I would love to read more NejiTen fics from you!

I cried. It's so... Perfect. Ugh. My feels.

That story...made me cry...with a smile on my face...*sniff* It was amazing

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This was one of the deepest stories I have ever read, and not to mention one of the most beautiful!

And to think that Neji is a stoic man. Only to Tenten had he done that begging!

Sweet!

AWW! Beautiful ending. I'm glad Neji regained his sight. :)

Keep writing!

M.I.

Beautiful story- I loved how it connected to the original fable of Rapunzel, how organic and natural and fierce Tenten and Neji's relationship is, I loved the little details. How Neji wrote 'Stop' on the scroll, and how well you wrote the Team Gai dynamic, how Tenten used her hair as a signal, that Neji does calligraphy and Tenten gets most of her scars from ironing. Thanks for writing :)

wow i loved how you ended it and i loved the entire story especially the way you twisted the rapunzel theme. i feel tenten cutting off her hair and the way it fluttered to the ground was dramatic and had a lot of visual impact ( great for the imagination).

i feel your writing has matured with time. and you can see the difference from chapter 1 to chapter 5.

as usual, your descriptions are really vivid. you just have a knack for it. and you also have a knack of writing great endings.

write more. i always enjoy your stories.

naash

Anything that I can say can be summed up as "garbled profuse mess of omgthisissobeautiful, why are there tears in my eyes, this fic just damn works." There. Saved you a wall of text of nonsensicalness.

Although I will add that when I learned this updated last Sunday I literally, I kid you not, yelled at my computer "OMG NO DON'T DISTRACT ME NOOO DON'T CLICK IT" (click)

So that is why I am late.

LOVED this story! so beautiful! and i hope you write more too. i absolutely love to read anything you write. great job!

wonderful, as always.

i have been reading your stories for quite a while now. been waiting for this one, and i'm glad you updated it.

good job!

Best(worst?) cliffhanger I've read in a while. Please finish! Beautiful story.

This story is beautifully written, absolutely seamless. Your writing style is captivating and every phrase seems so well thought out. Wonderful job. I feel privileged to have read such a lovely piece.

omg that was beautiful but what happened to neji is devastating.

please do update. its only one more chapter

you still havent lost your touch. its really good. i love their quiet romance