Eh ...

Points for the Dee Dee Ramone mention (longtime Ramones fan here). Minus points for all the lesbian stereotypes. Guess what? I don't wear leather or flannel, have a cat, am frigid, go straight for the nearest lesbian, etc.

NO! How dare you bastardize my beloved Monty Python like so ...

The formatting, the formatting! AAH.

I *want* to like this story, because there's so little HP femslash fiction, and I'm qu-eer, so I love reading f/f romances. But this fic just has no depth. I mean, it's entertaining enough, but ..

Don't take offence, Cattail Prophetess, but are you quite young?

I really hate Valleygirl!Lavender.

I like your writing style and this is a pretty good story, even if you didn't finish it. (I never knew there was a rumor about wearing green on thursdays! fascinating.) I very much liked the Monty Python dream sequence as well. The only bad part, really, was the long author's notes, the paragraph that basically said "drunk ravenclaw girls with dirty minds are getting it on, but I don't want to describe it."

I don't know the likelihood of you actually reading this review four years after the fact, but just in case you will, good job.

Hey!

that was the best thing I've ever read! *bow, bow*, after Micheal Jackson, I think I'll start worshiping you. I just found this site...but in the few hours I've spent here, most of what i did is read your stuff. I'm so glad I found it! By the way, about that book, truth, dare or promise, you didn't seem to sure, but yes, it does take place in australia. Anyhoo...i just read the first chapter, but I felt an urge to tell you how absolutly great it is before i read the rest. Maybe I should make a shrine...hm...that might be a little scary. I guess the shrine idea is dumm. Anyways, I'm off to read the other chapters *giggles with anticipation*

I love this fic! I haven't gotten around to reading much femslash yet, but now I'm more or less addicted to your characters- and Padma/Lisa. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please write soon! _

-Nimue

Holy shit... you're 13? Damn, good stuff! You must be one of those really smart mouthy little fuck's...

_ reminds me of me. Minus the smart and add violent. Anyways... Just wanted to say - I was guessing/assuming you'd be older than me. I feel so pathetic now... Bah, having an IQ of a rock isn't cool... Not cool at all.

I know you haven't updated in like 5 months... but meh. I'm reviewing. Deal with it.

Lmfao, love you're humour. Very amusing. I think it was ch. 3 and 4 that were best.

The f/f hints were cute but the funny stuff was what really kept avidly reading. Hardy har har. I almost laughed out loud. That's saying a lot. Laughing out loud when you're sitting alone in a room is a bit abnormal...

Update...

- Nif -

PS- FAKE FLAME... just fo fun.

Yew ar sik. Taking fictional characters and forcing them to be homosexual is just plain cruel. Leave 'em alone! Also... Padma isn't real two. She's unreal. So. Leave my wife alone. Siko. Oh and 'Roon' is straight two. Btw you suck sik kid.

Very cute fic! It may not be Deathless Prose, but it is very entertaining, and I like what you've done with Lisa and Padma in turning them into real charecters.

Nah... You're not bad.

Zabini as a transgender is a stroke of genius I think. Yay! For SS Firefly.

I'm so happy you finally updated... (And That I finally read. p)

Ack! It was so SHORT! And you left us all hanging! *sigh* But anywho, what little there was was very good and welcome and whatnot. Please finish it soon, pretty please? (Not like I'm one to talk about finishing fics, but that is NOT the point.)

Wow. You're a really good writer, especially since you're only 13. *stares in awe*

I like Lisa, which is odd. I don't usually like OCs. So YAY to you! :)

And another big YAY since you're a fellow Buffy fan! Anyhoo, I don't seem to be saying anything very important, so I should go.

cya:)

oh yeah, and I hope Padma and Lisa get together! ;) hehe