now would be a good time to see what sess and kags are doing back at the castle. show something like rin playing a trick on jaken and when he calls humans worthless, sess should go all postal and stuff. ja ne

very cool...who's next sango and miroku? lol

this was excellent.keep up the good work and writing.

lol that was amazing. i guess for the nex chapter have kouga show up lookin for 'his woman' and when he hears the news he goes to the house of the moon to fight sesshy.

FORGOT THIS WAS A TWO SHOT...MAKE IT A THREE?

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hahahaha dammn that is scanless of inuyasha
man id hatee to be kikyo in there

Great chp. this would make a great story. Your grammer is good and your story wan't boring. I think it would be best if you continued this you're a great writer.

lol the story is good. for a sequel, write in inuyasha's perspective about when he reads the note or whatever.

Great story. It's great writing and I hope to read more of yours sometime

you could actually continue the story if you thought about it insteadof doing a one shot