interesting Start

this sounded like it was going to be awesome why did you stop?

Good Story.

i lik the story its good i hope u continue it

hey i hope you update soon, i really liked this story. im really intrigued and we're only two chapters in! cant wait for more!

An intresting begining. You really have the characters down well, I can actually picture this happening. I'm curious to see how you develope the story, so I hope you update again soon.

Slightly OT question: In a lot of JAG fics, and some JAG eps, it is implied that Harm and Mac (a Marine, like Gibbs) always keep a sea bag packed in their cars in case they have to go away for an investigation on short notice. Why do you think Gibbs has not taught his team to do the same? (It would have saved McGee and Ziva loads of time AND McGee $800 in this chapter, if they knew beforehand to do that).

This is a good start... can't wait to see how you continue it.

Haha, funny

Love how you've build it as a real episode ;)