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Miss Danax
2009-09-06 . chapter 6
Loved it. (:
lildark7
2009-07-27 . chapter 6
Awesome story. Zip in action, that's so cool.
Keep writing.
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess
2009-05-29 . chapter 6
Great update! I really enjoyed the chapter- And I liked how Zip kept his calm. Great job! ^-^
MysticGypsyGirl
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
Yay! Go Zip! I thought it was a great ending chapter and I really hope you write more wonderful Tomb Raider fics!
OveractiveImaginer
2009-05-27 . chapter 6
Oh wow! I loved how Zip chipped in to help Lara there at the end! LOL 'you're just here to in though all those old computers aren't you?' XD

Heh, I thought you'd end it with some cliffhanger where they both got captured or something - kinda glad you didn't though :P

Awesome, can't wait to see how it ends! :D
MysticGypsyGirl
2009-05-13 . chapter 5
I really liked the story- Lots of action and suspense, which is great- And I hope you update this amazing fic soon.
OveractiveImaginer
2009-04-20 . chapter 5
LOL! XD OMG I think this has got to be one of my favourite chapters yet! :D

Did I mention how much I love the Lara-Zip banter? :D It's so funny and unbelievably in character - great work!

I loved her sarcasm at the beginning there and John's pathetic reaction to it and just the concept of a scavenger hunt was 'champion'! :P

'Delusions of grandeur!' Did you get that line from Wicked by any chance?

And did you notice that 'if it's not the key then what the hell could it be?' line totally rhymed? :D

Okay, keep up the good work!
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess
2009-04-06 . chapter 4
Great story! Love how much you have Zip in it. They should have kept him and Alistair talking in her ear when they released Underworld! Great job!
OveractiveImaginer
2009-04-05 . chapter 4
'a tad annoying' indeed! XD Hm, high road? Wonder what that could mean?

Short but sweet - loving it all the same! ;)

Hope you feel better soon!
OveractiveImaginer
2009-03-24 . chapter 3
'someone rather rude pushed me off a cliff' XD

LOL that's such a crystal dynamics lara thing to say! And poor Zip wanting to talk to the queen!

Loving the story so far, keep it up! ;)
GenerationX7 (SPTL@neo.rr.com)
2009-03-23 . chapter 3
I don't know what happened to my last review. You probably deleted it or it was never submitted. Weird huh? I do remember submitting it. Well as for this chapter. It was okay. I'll never get the Underworld references. As I never played the game. I don't know if I will either. As I'm always playing different Xbox 360 games, like Halo Wars or Dead Space. But well keep up the good work. I doubt I'll leave a review nexxt chapter. See ya around.
OveractiveImaginer
2009-03-19 . chapter 2
Awesome! This story just keeps getting better and better!

I shall await yon next chapter with great anticipation! :P
OveractiveImaginer
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
'Do stop pouting.' XD

Ooh, I like this one a lot! The interaction between Lara and Zip is so in character and funny! *thumbs up*

Wonder who the thief was...
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