omg, i didn't read the note (sorry) and wrote about how crona was a girl. i feel so stupid.

crona is a girl,but its ok. I thought she was a boy at first too, but then they started calling her medusas daughter and i figered it out. Although this works better for this story so i think you should just leave it as it is and remember for next time. otherwise this would be girl love and there would be a smaller audience.

this is so cute :) cant wait for more

Dragon!Chrona is pleasantly badass. But then, dragons usually have that effect.

hmm... I miss ragnarok already.

Augh! Dragon Chrona is just too akwardly cute to bear! Love this~

Aw... sucks to be Chrona. D:

I really like your writing style, your fluency and pace and the rest - and you can spell. That's a dozen brownie points right there. :D A unique idea, too, and one I can't wait to see the next installment of. I hope that Maka 'sees the light' (so to speak) abour Chrona's condition soon... I just think they're the most adorable couple in the series, seconded only by Maka/Soul. But there are plenty of those out there.

Keep up the good work!!

xx SP

*kicks for not letting her log in*

I really enjoyed this so far!

The last 2 or so paragraphs of this chapter are so bittersweet x.x poor, poor guy, and poor, poor Maka too, actually. Anywho, I shall be stalking this story

I love your writing, it's awesome. The parts of the B&B were well inserted. It made me wanna speak in high English. Lol. Don't give up just because people around here don't give many reviews. You should continue, I have a feeling it's going to be great.

Yay for Crona/Maka :D

Er, the dragon thing is kinda random, though i'm guessing it's supposed to be like that? Hah, poor Crona, just getting used to having friends and then being shaken up like that...uh, how big is Dragon!Crona anyway? obviously small enough that Soul can lift him...

What happened to Ragnarok though? Hrm. It's a mystery! (Ah, I hope he's gonna stick in the story though. Ragnarok's cool like that :D Hm, maybe Ragnarok really DID eat Crona? but something funky happened and so Crona didn't get digested? Or...well, there's probably something that makes more sense :/)

So i'm curious to see where this goes. Thanks very much for writing and I hope you continue!

Wow xD This is off to a really interesting start. I've always thought Chrona would make a good dragon.