OH MA GOSH!
this is imence Sian!
I have no idea what's going to happen next, and your OC is so strong. Why did you base it off? Violet from Series of Unfortunate Events? It seems like her...
Well anyway, you already have over 100 views for this one, so this isn't really necesary (could never spell that word) but i cant wait for the next chapter X3

Great chapter! I don't mind that they're shorter because that means I can read them while I'm doing homework... like right now.

It's amazing that she can't do the Cruciatus Curse; I mean didn't Harry do it the one time and it was weak? Yet he still did it, you know? Typical Pettigrew, slobbering and whining. I thought Lord Voldemort would've said something to make her want to hurt him; maybe that he betrayed her real parents or something.

Great chapter, once again!

I love it so much...
...all of it

I absolutely LOVED this chapter! The cliffhanger at the end was amazing, and I cannot wait to see what happens to Tempest. Please, please, please update son! Thanks :D

Great story. I just wish Bella had a bigger role.

I love it...

I admit, I added this story to my favorite list before reading more than the intro. I am glad I did though. I just sat here and read from the first chapter to now. Very good story. It's going to be very interesting to see how you are going to take this story. Awaiting your next chapter!

Hmm...Narcissa's reaction is not what I would have guessed it to be. Honestly, I think I would have expected her to fly into a rage, but after reading this chapter I definately like your idea better. I cannot wait for her to go over to Severus's!

I love it...

Lol... Sure, Bella won't care about the hair.
XD
Bella is fun...well, that's true...
Temp liking Bella...yay! That's just so cool.
Poor Cissy xD
Lol. I love it when Bella taunts Lucius.
LOL! A book=a weapon. Sure...
Poor Rodolphus^^
And Bella doesn't like Snape...that never changes...
Doesn't like Potions either...
And doesn't seem to like books^^
I love her.
Though I love books...
XD. Poor Cissy. Abandoned...
It's strange that Temp manages to feel bored around Bella. Or maybe it's just my Bella-loving frenzy that makes me blind to some parts of the situation...
Lol. Rod being in a VERY good mood...
I love Bella's answer...
Tonight is the night^^
That sounds so spectacular...
I love the battle scene so much...
There was only one captured? Lucius?
I love it.

Sweet for Narcissa^^
Wow! What a nice greeting!
Dust and food^^
Embraces!
Wow, lol
Rodolphus talk xD
Tongue controlling! For Bellatrix! I hope he enjoys disappointment.
Lol. Lucius teasing Bellatrix...That's nice
And Temp wonders who Bella is. Of course...
That is a pretty good explanation indeed^^
Lucius trying authority with Bella... Does he hope it will work? (sighs)
Wow...big shock.
In fact, she needed to really push Temp to see what she was worth...
I love the ending...
That's so strong...
So emotional...
I look forward to an update!
Pretty please?
It was awesome.

Moping moping moping...
Moping AND lamenting.
Being forced won't do her nor the Dark Lord any good.
Lucius didn't even know the escape?
wow wow wow wow wow...
Who will be pleased to see Bella? :D
Two poor men...
Is it her first time witnessing the Cruciatus curse?
Hard...
Oh. I understand who the man is now.
Ah...the arrivals.
She noticed Bellatrix... I suppose the other one is Rodolphus?
Perfect timing indeed...poor Muggles.
Smiles coming out...
And torture. Oh well...
Bella's disappointed with Temp...
Too bad.

Nightmares...bad
Cedric? Strange...
Lessons and gloating...perfect
Books and books and books^^
Lol. The book changes itself? Smart...
Oh... She'll be back with the Malfoys?
When Snape goes to Hogwarts...of course.
She has 3 chapters left to meet Bellatrix...I'll curse you if she doesn't...
She'll finish the books...that's a dream.
She thought bad about Voldy...bad bad girl^^
Cheating LOL
Idiots by Draco's opinion...lol
And she chose the right person to talk about Harry with :D
The Dark Lord! Wow...

Nightmares...bad
Cedric? Strange...
Lessons and gloating...perfect
Books and books and books^^
Lol. The book changes itself? Smart...
Oh... She'll be back with the Malfoys?
When Snape goes to Hogwarts...of course.
She has 3 chapters left to meet Bellatrix...I'll curse you if she doesn't...
She'll finish the books...that's a dream.
She thought bad about Voldy...bad bad girl^^
Cheating LOL
Idiots by Draco's opinion...lol
And she chose the right person to talk about Harry with :D
The Dark Lord! Wow...

An enemy...which one?
Red-headed?
Mrs Weasley!
Okay...
I was like «But it's not the Burrow!». I'm so slow sometimes...
To see Sirius...wow
Fred and George annoying Ron...lol
Ah! Dog!
^^
He recognized her at once...of course
And she knows his name...
And she knows Bella's too, but that's all...lol
Bella won't be pleased
What exactly did Snape do to Lily?
And it wasn't a joke, the everything...
Of course she isn't staying.
Snivellus... I knew she'd like it.
So Sirius is going to curse Snape? Or not?
She has a name indeed^^
It doesn't matter to her...why would she want to stay with Sirius Black?
Visiting lol
He's the lesser of the evils...indeed xD
Conversation...nice.