 Gamebird 2009-11-27 . chapter 7Awesome. (Yes, I'm *still* going to use that word. It fits. So there.)
Yes, the US has a screwed up idea of medical care. I won't burden you with the idiocy of getting access to any birth control more reliable to a condom. I'm not sure how it is in other countries, but it could be so much better here. Our family imports antibiotics illegally from Mexico. It is my understanding that many people of means do the same, although for some Canada is more efficient.
I like the explanation. I like your layered and interesting characters. I like your take on things. Hesam is cool. I was very happy to see an explanation for how Peter found Angela - something I'd wondered about myself.
I like how you handled Rebel, which remains perfectly in line with canon.
You have become my first (and so far only) Author listed in my Favorites. Feel privileged. Or that I'm silly. |
 Valor95 2009-10-02 . chapter 7Oh my lord this is one of the best Peter fanfictions I have read in a long time! How you capture his anger toward Nathan is awesome and Hesam well this is how I fell in love with his character.Thank for the awesome fan-fic! |
 kerry 2009-08-03 . chapter 7 ooh i can so imagine this happening, any chance of you continuing ?
-k- |
 Akemichan07 2009-05-10 . chapter 7Hi!
I love this story. I think you did a wonderful job, to show us Peter in “fugitives mode”; you show us what means to be hunting with no mercy in your own country, to be hurt without any possibilità to be heal in a hospital, to stave without money to buy some food, to be considered dangerous wothout any guilt... It was really touching, and you describe that very well. And put Hesam into was a really good idea, I liked it, as I like the fact that you made the reader first believe he had betrayed Peter, and then showed un it was no true. Even the relationship with Nathan is good. Well job! |
 marinawings 2009-04-17 . chapter 7this is really good! i think it's a very plausible explanation of peter's whereabouts between episodes. i always kinda wondered about that. i think you did a really good job of incorporating "rebel," and also with peter's personality. good work! |
 Cap'n Awesome 2009-04-07 . chapter 6Hi, I'm reviewing again for a reason. I watched the episode where Peter saves his mum and I noticed how well this story fits in with that! Just wanted to point that out, thanks! |
 Cap'n Awesome 2009-04-06 . chapter 7Awesome! I've not visited the Heroes fandom for ages but it's fics like these that make it worthwhile! Please keep writing, you write Peter so spectacularly! Update soon? |
 redrose7856 2009-04-05 . chapter 7I liked this a lot! Well done!
~redrose7856 |
 redrose7856 2009-04-05 . chapter 5This is excellent! Well done on this! You've captured Peter perfectly! I love this!
~redrose7856 |
 MrHalliwell 2009-03-26 . chapter 1Hi!
I like the whole thing with Peter and others. It's great you put rebel in this FF. For now, I read 3 chapters. Sad 'cause you are not writing it after 7. chapter. You should consider writing chapter 8 (maybe I'm wrong 'cause I didn't read the whole story yer), here are many people who are reading this. That's all for now.
MrHallweill ;) |
 Princess Denise 2009-03-26 . chapter 7 continue please... xD I´m lovin´ it... :o) |
 by7the7sea 2009-03-25 . chapter 7Well, I'm glad that dream Peter had in the last chapter was just a dream and didn't come true. :)
I enjoyed this story. Thanks for posting it
On another note, you are also an artist, right? There's something mentioned in a conversation coming up in "Into Asylum" that I hope will inspire you to draw. The reason I know about it already is because it was in the Sprint Sneak Peek clip. |
 The_Textbook_Answer 2009-03-25 . chapter 7 Aww! Noo! Don't stop now! This is the best story out here! Keep going! PLEASE?! If you've run out of ideas then just make it like tags for every episode; show us what thier doing, unless, you know, you want to write a new story for every episode. I'm good with that, too! I need my Petrelli fix and you're stories are so good so don't stop! Ever! No really. I'm always wondering what Peter is up to and this story was a bloody gift from the heavens! All your stories are. I can't even begin to describe how much I love 'Touch and Go'. I should go review and tell you!
Please write more; if not in this story, then in general. |
 AnnaLou 2009-03-24 . chapter 6I love how Hesam's being supportive... who would actually not freak out when someone tells you he can fly? =)
Really nice work, can't wait for more! |
 Princess Denise 2009-03-24 . chapter 6 Next chapter, please! It´s beautiful story, I love Peter! xD |