interesting story...i like it and f course i think sere is right for darien not defending her. lol. well cant wait to what is going to happen and of course for sere's make over. cant wait.

Please update this story-it's good. I hope Serena learns to accept herself while raining some much needed hell down on Darien and Natalie.

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Please update soon!

god:)
please update son

such a sweet story.. :).. can't wait til darien loses his cool when sere really changes.. also can't wait for sere's confidence to come back.. great story.. update!!

Aw, poor Sere! Darien needs to get a clue! Can't wait for Serena to shove her amazingness in Natalie's face. Hopefully next chapter?

Hey, this is getting to be a really great story, please update I'm dying to read more

Update please!

it's cute n fluffy, you should update soon

So is this going to continue? How does she become perfect?
Interesting but fast chapter.

Loved it :)

As usual, it was a great chapter! I just think that maybe your chapters should have a little more action in them. All that really happened here was the pen not working and a conversation between Serena and Darien. So maybe you could work on that!
Anyway, your story seems to be going great! You have quite a few reviews- yay for you!
Hope you had a fun time overseas!
Ammie^^

The apology for his lack of reaction was nice but now he has to actually show Serena that its not just empty words.
He also needs to realize that Natalie reacted the way she did because of their prior intimacy and that her opinion is biased and her lashing out at Serena was out of line.

really really really good!
please update soon

Ldsprincess

great chapter