you do know that jane and alec are 12-13 right?

Apart from that it is a great story

I have only read up to chapter 6 so far but I like this part where Jane danced in the human's blood gleefully is just as I envision her.

LOL there so sadisticly cool! Especially Alec!

I know Jane and Alec are broter and sister but I like yor stories about jane and alec but you could think about writing a love story about Alec and Jane or a love story aboutJ ane and Demitri and in either one(if you dicied to do one)about how Jane thinks that she cant fall in love

:D,Eclipse

Im just nine but love your stories now dont take this offensive but if you wanted to read a diffrient kind of story read(go to google and type in this):Bella Swan kiddnaper a twilight fanfic ok well gotta read the rest of this story bye!

:D,Eclipse

YAYZ! I think that Dakota will mess up Jane b/c she only plays those nice girls, she can't be evil.

i loved it but seeing as how im a huge harry potter fan i might be slightly bias.

Um...Okay. I think that you could have Santiago lure Felix up to a realy high building, and then have someone push him out. Then, um, while his body heals from the impact, Alec could re-arrange his bones so that his feet can be glued together. Then the twins could put him in one of those 'space-bag' things so that he's vacumed sealed and cant move and mail him to jamaca. Not the best Idea in the world, but better then no idea, right? By the way, i love the story so far. It's so dark, just the way I like 'em.

i think your doing really well. pleze update soon, i want to know what the plan is.

great chapter ;)

you are very welcome, it's great so far can't what for more p

haha, nice plan :)

very funny. pleze write another chapter soon. if you read the list, it seems jane and alec dont like felix very much.

nice! great chapter :)

i think the vacation is gonna be so funny! thanks for the shout out