damn Gohan's luck with girls, why is it always the guys who dont know what their doing, also the Son gene only makes them naive to everything except fight and eating they do that fine by themselves

Well, I can certainly understand not being able to write. College has ruled my life and I've had little room to write myself. Tomorrow however, I'm going for hours upon hours to get as much writing done as possible.

As for the chapter, it was good. That first paragraph however, needs a lot of cleaning up. It was just very confusing, but it wasn't a horribly important part, so it's alright. I'm just crossing my fingers for a longer chapter next time.

Oh boy, we're closer to a Gohan/Sasami reunion. HOORAY! Terrific stuff. Please update soon.

this is fabulously written and i love the characters and their part in the story! i'm really excited for the next chapter. i'm interested in Ephraim/Gohan and how his personality progresses. keep up the good work!

wonderful chapter Ryoko sounds truly concerned about Ephraim(gohan) i wonder how that will play out and i have a hunch picclo's warning to Cosmos will come true

Love Ryoko, I'm still amazed that Gohan ended up more Naive then ever before

Very nice. I really enjoyed the character developement in this chapter. And it's probably best that not so many more characters be introduced...at least for a while.

If your talking about the ryoko scene from this chapter, and not one in the future, then you have nothing to worry about as far as the rating is concerned. In fact, you weren't really pushing the envelope. It was actually mild to moderate "T." So no worries for you there.

Terrific chapter. It seems like we're getting closer to a reunion. I wonder what Sasami will have to say when she finds out. This just gets more and more fun by the chapter. I'm waiting anxiously for the next installment. Please update soon.

Aside from a couple words being omitted, this was very nice indeed. I'm glad to see your back to doing this story, it's really the only story update I've had from any of the stories I like in while.

Good job though. I'm glad to see Ryoko, Krillin, Yamcha, and 18 join the mix. From the looks of it, you may have a possible Gohan/Ryoko relationship going. A very interesting idea. One I could fully encourage.

It was funny to see Gohan use his power on that ship and come back smiling innocently. I just thought that was hilarious but completely in character.

good chapter i can not wait to see what happens next piccolo is on the case

I loved it. I'm glad you wrote another chapter. I like how you are incorporating all of the characters of DBZ, Sailor Moon, and Tenchi Muyo nearly seamlessly. it definitely has a Star Wars feeling to it. I give it two thumbs up. I hope to read more from you. Please update soon.

Finally i've waited for this, an interesting group you have put together, When i heard about the bandits first in my head I peged every one of the members sans Ryoko did not see her coming, now my only question is to where Piccolo goes first, the moon kingdom for where Gohan's energy was last felt

Hey, long time no see! I only just remembered to check in to see if you put up the sequel yet and what do you know you have. I see that you haven't updated in awhile, but I understand that you had other obligations that you wanted to get out the way. Just as long as you finish this fic one day.

Now as for the fic, I'm loving it so far. I really love the situation you have put the characters in after seven years. It seems only natural as a response to the events at the end of the last fic. With all that's going on so far, I can't wait for the first major event and that's obviously what's going to go down at the Gala.

The suspense is a bit much to handle, but I can't wait until when everyone gets to see Gohan again whether it be good or bad. Heck, I don't know if anyone will recognize him either way. Also, I wonder if Sasami will be going to this Gala as well. With all her scheming and loathing I doubt she paid much attention to the events occurring among the kingdoms.

I'm also glad to see all the original characters are back. I hope Piccolo will be back as well. Or rather I may dread his return. I mean, who knows what condition Piccolo will be in after seven years with no Gohan. And last but not least, I am very interested in figuring out who this mysterious saiyan is that serves Galaxia. I'm just happy that it's not Gohan, but whoever it is I'm sure that I will definitely be surprised.

Anyway, the fic is starting off greatly and I can't wait for more.

Until then...

-Pchu

Ephraim=Android 17? This is a great story you've written. I read the first story and went through a whirlwind of emotions that ended with sorrow at such a sad ending.

Hope there's more Gohan action later on though, possibly a Super Sayian moment that the whole galaxy sees, but no one knows who's the one behind the golden hair and teal eyes.

Great stuff. Is Ephraim Gohan's new name? Anyway, I love this story. I can't wait till we actually get to the Gala. Please update soon.