I really think you should continue this story...It's really great! :)

I hope you can continue this story. It's really interesting and I want to see how it would work out for Brooke and Nathan ^^

Another lovely, but heartbreaking oneshot. I'm glad that we were able to see everything through Nathan's eyes, but knowing that ultimately, the same outcome would occur made me terribly sad. Marrying someone other than the person you truly want to be with and having to look her in the eye while you do it, I can't even imagine what that feels like.

I wish that Brooke would listen to Nathan, take a chance on how much they love each other and put their happiness above everyone else's. It's obvious that they're soulmates, destined to always love each other, so why let anyone else into the equation. I understand that she feels guilty for letting the affir ever begin in the first place and that she loves Haley and wants what is best for her, but what if marrying Nathan isn't what's best for her, especially if he's in love with another woman.

This one was just as beautifully written as the first one. I really liked reading in Nathan's point of view. The only thing I didn't like was already knowing what was going to happen. LOL. Still the emotions were spot on and so raw. I agree Nathan made the wrong decision. And again, I wish you'd continue with this story. I feel like with your writing talent and the base of the story itself, there is so much potential here. I really enjoyed it!

I just finished reading both stories and I had tears. Beautifully well written. You should merge these stories together and cont writing. You have the talent to take this idea so far. Please consider it. If not, you should write more Brathan bc you know exactly how to put them together. You capture their love, needs and unselfishness amazingly well. Brathan is your blank canvas and you turn them into your masterpiece! Very heartbreaking! Great job I hope you write more. Best of luck!