Yaha! That was fantastic! And yet... one of these things is not like the others... MYSTIA? What the hell?

Was she really a popular item with Alice? All the way back in the ought'9? Those must have been heady days, when yuri madness was just taking hold of everyone.

Heh, I bet you thought I was going to say Yuuka!

This... This is just fucking HILARIOUS! Especially their reaction when Tenshi shows up. I seriously WISH I could see the looks on their faces. Now I bet some of them wish that Tenshi had never shown up.

I actually read this on deviantArt at some point, and I laughed my ass off, no joke. Finding it on FanFiction is very awesome, considering how hilarious this is. XD

All in all, this story kicks ass.

I will admit that almost any thing can happen in Gensokyo...but this one is a bit...errrrrrr unresonable...

oh god... I don't know whether to laugh or feel sorry, maybe both. that was freaking hilarious though...

Hehe, pretty funny, Marisa always gets teamed up with Alice in fanworkds, lol, so true.

Aw... Alice...

Why does everyone pick on her so?

This could have been done a lot more tastefully, IMHO, and still kept the same plot and ending. It seemed slightly rushed, and gives me the feeling of a drunken author.

Oh geez...

WHAHAHAHAHAHA Awesome.

Nyahaha i was hesitant to read this, but OMG a whore Alice? awesome XD

OMG what a surprise ending I love this story and I can imagine Yuka as my dad O_O scary