It's really good! I hope u be able to write more.

are you going to continue? this is SO GOOD! D

Argh...you're not quitting there are you?

Really liked it, thoroughly intrigued, piqued my interest.

I WANT MORE.

WTF? Your fucking kidding me? Right? ARRGH!

You just gotta finish this one - you just GOTTA!

Please, please, eternal servitude up for grabs and EVERYTHING!

Just PLEASE finish the story! *sob*

Pam

Father/Suiter talk... always good. LOL

Christ Jake! Leave it ALONE damnit!

YES! She woke up!

Edward! Read her journal! NOW!

This is gonna be good! I'm already hooked.

please continue

I would of expected a little more anger on Edward part when he found out Bella was assaulted. He gets upset at anything that happens to her, so I'm thinking he might of seen "red" when he found out what happened to her.

Wow I really love all your stories can't wait for the next chapter

Oh no!

This is a really good story, and you're such a good writer, please update soon. I want to know if Edward leaves. I hope he doesn't, that will be sad.

Anway. Update. Please! :D

x

woow this is completely diff from the others that i've read...and what does edward mean by "Bella, maybe this was a mistake; I think I should go."? he's not thinking of leaving her again is he? plz plz cont soon

good story, i really hope you can continue it sometime! i love all your fics!