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JazzyRoxMySox95
2009-11-08 . chapter 20
I really love your writing. I however, hate Annabelle. She should just... GO HOME! She totally made the whole storyline better, but now sue should leave. Poor Rose and Emmett! Well, that's all I have to say.

Love,
Shupe
annakouklitsa
2009-10-25 . chapter 20
PLEASE, UPDATE SOON!
fanpire-nikkireedfan
2009-10-11 . chapter 20
wow. I nearly cried reading this cuz i was listening to satellite heart from the new moon soundtrack and it all seemed very sad :( UPDATE i need them for sustainance... I love Rosalie and Emmett and I love your portrayal of them. Amazing! Please keep going! Congrats on your two A's and B btw, i realise thats a bit late but oh well :D
DntTrustAho
2009-10-03 . chapter 20
love it(;
tunfiskenbob
2009-09-17 . chapter 20
Brilliant, as always, but where is the next chapter? I'm missing it...
Hannah
2009-08-30 . chapter 20
Hoping for an update soon. Such a great story.
impeccableblahs
2009-08-26 . chapter 20
so i've finally caughten up with the story.. it's amazing. just as good, if not better, then the first. infinitely jealous of your talents. you weave the relationships so perfectly. rosalie's my absolute favorite and you write her so great. loved the moment with bella and rose in this chapter. i feel so bad for everyone, lol. i can't wait for more. hope to see more jasper soon? :P
mill.inala
2009-08-24 . chapter 20
your making the story mostly abput Edward and Bella.
TwilightGirl1702
2009-08-23 . chapter 20
I hope Edward does go after her.

And Rosalie finding out about this made me cry. Her reaction and Emmetts were so heartbreaking.

It was a really good chapter though as far as writing goes. You definitely had all of the right emotions and thoughts in the right place!
anagharoxox
2009-08-23 . chapter 20
You had better update soon, this angst and suspense is KILLING me, you hear?
Anagharoxox
cullenfan83
2009-08-21 . chapter 20
Awesome update. i fell so bad for Rose and Emmett. I hope all works out for them and they can have a baby. Great update. I can't wait for more.
Madame Star
2009-08-21 . chapter 20
You know, for someone who loves the couple so much, you sure are putting them through a lot of torture. I can't blame you though...it makes for really good reading :)

Looking forward to the next chapter, -Star-
emmettroselover
2009-08-21 . chapter 20
Wow...thats all I can really say and I have a feeling that is all I will say until this whole angst train stops...wow.
angela2805
2009-08-21 . chapter 20
That was a really good chapter! I literally cant wait for another! Please update soon!
Sparkleyangel
2009-08-21 . chapter 20
omg no thats not the results i wanted for them D: i really hope they find some way to have THEIR kids and not some one elses cause they would have really cute babies :D love it can't wait to see what happens poor rose and emmett
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