-at Disclaimer- ...You know, I can totally imagine you doing that. Not in a creepy-stalker-type way, but that just seems like the sort of thing you're likely to do, given any kind of provocation at all. :P
Huzzah! I approve.

AWW!! Ish evil!cute! :D :D :D I love.
FRCLMYE: Me too. -wise nodding- It's rather irritating at times.

Noo, poor Rose. =( Nice conversation between the TARDIS and the Doctor; more soon please! *^_^*

~Azure

So John/ Valeyard manipulated Rose's mind - that b@$t@rd! Of course, he seems pretty needy...did he do it on purpose? He doesn't seem to be completely insane yet. Almost there, just not quite. Rose does seem to be different - in chapter 9 where she zapped the bad guy seemingly without thinking. Protective mother, or altered mind state? Hmm...

This is getting very exciting!

whoohoo go tardis i love her you guys go save the damsel in distress
maria

Oh, I know "That Guy With the Glasses"! He does some of those 5 second funny takes on famous films (e.g. "Titanic in 5 Seconds":
Man: But the ship can't sink!
Titanic: Plop.
Anyway, moving on. A couple of punctuation/spelling mistakes, but only a couple, and everything else was good. Short 'n' sweet :) Very amusing, but hints at a faster change in pace to come... Nicely done!
Ano

yays and lots of bananas! update to an awesome fic! woot! XP

Getting a little over-protective? Why does it end here? :( Rose has to realize that HER Doctor wouldn't do that... (plus.. he's been turned into a domestic!) She must suspect something's up... right? And I miss the proper Doctor :( Alright then, enough complaining from me! Sorry, I'm overly attached to my idea of Rose and the Doctor, it's healthy for me to read other stuff ;D You're a very good writer, so I'll read some more of your stories ^.^
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Tough love :`( you just called my Doctor stupid :`( BUT I shall get over that and continue reading!! :D
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So.. is he bad? o.0 It's kinda sweet that he'd do all that for her, but I'm not sure that the real doctor could sacrifice a gazillion people for one person no matter how much he loved them, that would be almost selfish.
Well, thanks for this enlightening chapter though ^.^ helps clear some things up!
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Oh good! No killing, but not exactly friendly... why doesn't she believe the REAL Doctor? Oi! Grr! Well... at least she didn't kill him... that's a good start ^.^ PLEASE tell me this has a happy ending! PLEASE :D
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Whew! Cold, evil grin... hard to picture on such a cute face lol ^.^ I'm not sure what the Valeyard thing is about really though... is he supposed to come as the 13th regeneration or is he a separate person that comes between the 12th to 13th regeneration? Oi! Confusing... brain... hurting! Alright so... on to the next chapter! (I'm praying that Rose doesn't kill the real Doctor... maybe even a nice hug? :D No... I'm just too optimistic :P)
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Oi! Rose is going to KILL HIM isn't she? I do love that they have a TARDIS now... did you get the idea of them growing a TARDIS from a deleted scene in Journey's End? I read the script for it and it talked about growing a TARDIS from a piece of another one... and... how did he go to the other universe? o.0
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Oh... Valeyard was bad though! And and you were giving my Doctor some "tough-love" again :`( (Or rather you KILLED him in her dream! :P) So, I really hope the real Doctor swoops in to save Rose from this Valeyard guy soon... and I really hope that Rose doesn't hate him for it. But of course... this is you we're talking about! Oh well... can't WAIT!! :D

Much love!
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Oh... I think I've heard of this Valeyard before... no doubt from the classics? I'll have to look it up before I go on ^.^ Ah, dontcha just love the TARDIS? :)
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