Ah, Catch-22. A brilliant drabble about nothing, as Catch-22 was loath to do a lot of the time. You had your work cut out, but it could very well fit in to the rest of the story, too.

Wow, just, wow! You've really captured the esscence of Heller's witty and boggly writing technique; you have maintained his characters and made some excellent banter between them! Although the Catch-22 Fanfiction fandom is small, this story shines brightly! I hope (hope hope HOPE) that you'll pursue writing for this book sometime in the future (however, the chances of that appear dim). :/

Loved it!

Jankz

Nice, simple oneshot. Captured the spirit of Heller well, with the inverse statements, Dunbar seeking boredom, and such so. Successful fanfictional attempt.

Awesome in its simplicity. Great job!

haha I'm really happy that people have written Catch 22 fanfics, cuz the book was such a revelation. good job

You nailed the characters. I loved the imagery!

Impressive. You've captured the frustratingly bewildering style of Catch-22 perfectly. Characterisation is excellent, and the characters themselves are all suitably nuts. Well done. :)

For the only Catch-22 story thus far, you've set a good standard for others to follow.

-Joe

Sounds exactly like Catch-22...bewildering. You mimic the style very well.

However, after a character says something, it's usually followed by a comma, apostraphe, and then a _lowercase_ letter. Not "Gimme a seed!" Yelled..., but instead "Gimme a seed!" yelled.

Other than that, it was a good piece. Keep writing!

Hey. Nicely done. Definetly(I never spell that word right) in Heller's style. I enjoyed this. Brief though it was

Very nice. You have captured the spirit of Heller perfectly!

That was a funny story. And I agree. It is better than the actual second book. We need more people to write fanfiction stories about Catch-22. *nods to self* yup. Sure do...

It's better than the real life sequal, that's for sure.