|Reviews for Private Pomegranate|
| draco-severus-mmm 1/25/12 . chapter 1
Ah, Catch-22. A brilliant drabble about nothing, as Catch-22 was loath to do a lot of the time. You had your work cut out, but it could very well fit in to the rest of the story, too.
| Jankz 12/20/11 . chapter 1
Wow, just, wow! You've really captured the esscence of Heller's witty and boggly writing technique; you have maintained his characters and made some excellent banter between them! Although the Catch-22 Fanfiction fandom is small, this story shines brightly! I hope (hope hope HOPE) that you'll pursue writing for this book sometime in the future (however, the chances of that appear dim). :/
| Formerly Chilltown 3/23/11 . chapter 1
Nice, simple oneshot. Captured the spirit of Heller well, with the inverse statements, Dunbar seeking boredom, and such so. Successful fanfictional attempt.
| lovova 2/24/11 . chapter 1
Awesome in its simplicity. Great job!
| Jewboy Extrordinaire 8/29/09 . chapter 1
haha I'm really happy that people have written Catch 22 fanfics, cuz the book was such a revelation. good job
| minderbinder 6/17/09 . chapter 1
You nailed the characters. I loved the imagery!
| The Joe and Gromit Show 6/14/09 . chapter 1
Impressive. You've captured the frustratingly bewildering style of Catch-22 perfectly. Characterisation is excellent, and the characters themselves are all suitably nuts. Well done. :)
For the only Catch-22 story thus far, you've set a good standard for others to follow.
| silverflight8 6/2/09 . chapter 1
Sounds exactly like Catch-22...bewildering. You mimic the style very well.
However, after a character says something, it's usually followed by a comma, apostraphe, and then a _lowercase_ letter. Not "Gimme a seed!" Yelled..., but instead "Gimme a seed!" yelled.
Other than that, it was a good piece. Keep writing!
| tattooerofwalruses 4/24/09 . chapter 1
Hey. Nicely done. Definetly(I never spell that word right) in Heller's style. I enjoyed this. Brief though it was
| Nongarak 4/20/09 . chapter 1
Very nice. You have captured the spirit of Heller perfectly!
| HappyStickofTNT 4/14/09 . chapter 1
That was a funny story. And I agree. It is better than the actual second book. We need more people to write fanfiction stories about Catch-22. *nods to self* yup. Sure do...
| bjkatcher 3/31/09 . chapter 1
It's better than the real life sequal, that's for sure.