What an angsty chapter. I can imagine him doing this (killing himself) is Riza did die.

That was really sad and depressing, and very well-written. Good job!

This really made me cry. You are a truly talented author. I have your stories saved on my phone browser to read on long journeys and I've read 'em all. I'm not a crazy stalker though!

You're awesome and an inspiration to my royai!

awesome opossum

I was planning on flaming you to be honest because most writers that write on this site suck.

I was surprised that you didn't. You far from suck. You are actually talented. This fiction is a prime example of what fiction on this site should be like. It was like I was watching it and from the first sentence I was hooked.

Amazing writing! No wonder everyone loves you so much!

OMG! I CRIED! its SO SAD! awesome job! now i fel as though i cannot form coherent sentences!!

D; sad...

That was really sad :(. Really well written but sad.

this is really good! i luv it! thanks for taking my request! luv ya!
-chris

Very true. Suicide is most definitely not the way out of ANYTHING, and people who are seriously thinking about going down that route should get help. Of course, this also involves the careful observation and support of those around them.

Aside from that, this is very wonderfully written. It was short, but managed to get the point across quite well. Of course we realize that Roy doesn't really want to live without Riza, and that, for him, life without her isn't really life at all.

Although I'm pretty sure you won't be continuing this unless you are hit with a brilliant epiphany, I am rather curious to know how everyone else will react. Will Havoc, Falman and the others know that all Roy wanted was too see Riza again? It does leave a lot of question open.

Either way, great one-shot, even if the theme was rather depressing.

~byakuxhisa4eva

This is definitely powerful, a good write. Well done on this story. *nod*

Aw! It's so sad! *hugs Roy*