I love this! :)

I love Ash and Mare! Again, Damon-esque male characters ftw XD Like with Quinn and Rashel, I don;t think we really see just how far Ashwould go for his love and how much she has changed him, unless you've read the Ash and Mary-Lynette story on L.J Smith's website set after the latest book. If you haven't read it, it is too cute for words! I think Ash would feel exactly like this, and I think you've got a skill for really putting across L.J's characters. Another story well done :D

Amazing! It's really good. Honestly!

It's so sweet and adorable! I love Ash too!

i love it, but all your stuff is so bloody short! i wish you would add a few chapters to, oh, let's see, all of them.

WHAT THE F**K

loved it!

Aw, I have only read the first three pack.

I kind of laughed at how ironic that Ash, falls for a human. It was ironic, then I was like aw.

I like it.

P.S. in the second paragraph...counts...thrid sent. I think you mean who instead of how. Just thought you'd like to know.

Haha! Loved the disclaimer at the end! Don't we all? Haha!

I like Quinn too!

Haha!

Anyways, this was cute!

oh this is so cute i hope you post a new chapter soon

Awesome-ocity! Great story. You might not think so, but the oneshots you write are better than any lame, ansty poems that i write. I know i'm crowding the bubble a bit by reading the night world books,, but you and nuzzo talk about it like it's the greatest thing since Cam (and velcro, if you want to get picky about your sayings), so i just had to read it. Not being able to follow the conversations around me really pisses me off. Anyhoo, from what i read in the first Book of Ash, you've got his POV down. I seriously think you could be a great legit author. Wow, the random spellcheck thing on this computer says that legit is a word. I didn't think is was legitimately a word. Did you know that they put Bootylicious in the dictionary? I think i spelled it wrong, but you get the idea. You know, it really bothers me when people say 'they' to talk about higher authorities. Eg., they've been playing way too many billy mays commercials on tv lately. I've begun to refer to 'them' as They Inc. Sorry about the rabmly-ness... I know, i bother me too. Ah! Mother is calling me to the kitchen for the consumption of birthday cake! Did I mention it's my birthday? And Kel's birthday? -amelia

Ps. Blockbuster rasmussen with a random ice cream bar best birthday present ever

You write amazing one shots, Em. I'm jealous.