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| mistylove 2000 2007-08-11 ch 10, | abusethe last part was funny typical pikachu |
| bloom 2007-06-01 ch 7, anon. | abuseit _ sob_ was buetiful wa. misty does love ash |
| Cipher Admin Eevee 2006-08-28 ch 10, | abuseThis is a very well written fanfiction, with plenty of fluff and the like. Angst seems to appear a little in the chapters, but it doesn't really matter. Pokeshipping appears in great measure, though, like the anime, neither want to be the first to say their wishes. Misty's sisters (whom I have never thought of in a good light) appear here to save the day, something I would have never expected, and to bring these two who are destined to be together, together, in all. You're great, and so are your stories. This fanfiction is nicely written, and well worth its weight (if it were etched into lead) in Ho-oh's flames. |
| x-Medicate-x-Me-x 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abuseHey this is anniechanalc but my account was banned so... |
| Anniechanalc 2005-12-07 ch 6, | abusegreat fic please keep going but work on the grammer some. |
| Anniechanalc 2005-12-07 ch 5, | abuseVery cool! |
| Anniechanalc 2005-12-07 ch 4, | abuse"want more"XD!that sounded wrong in a sexual way .> HENTAI U.S.A!PERVERT U.S...S...ert?u.u..anyways awsome sfic please continue and all tha yadaballo |
| Anniechanalc 2005-12-07 ch 3, | abuseAwsome fiction...it shall live...FOREVER! |
| Anniechanalc 2005-12-07 ch 2, | abuseThis story is ** funny! I copied it to another website and took credit...JUST KIDDING I SWEAR!I dont do that O.Olol,its a good fic really,just dont abuse anything or make pokemon characters ooc because pokemon was a gift from the gods. -Number one pokemon fan in the world,Annie Lynn Chandler |
| Anniechanalc 2005-09-22 ch 1, | abuseWow!Cool plot!This kinda rocks!I`m keep`in an eye on this stry!Keep it up! |
| karina 2005-07-22 ch 10, anon. | abuseaw...i luv it! its so typical in a play!=D the play was also lyk romeo and juliet! that their families are in a feud... yeah i kinda figure that out! but yours is the best! such a great story and a very cute ending XD! oh how i luv ash n misty! |
| Chaos-Paladin 2005-03-17 ch 10, | abuseman, all that fluff made clouds look like rocks! great ending! here is my evaulation: originality - 7/10 - same fluff, same great classic quality - 9/10 great fic (dont think i never noticed pokemon tower, now i see why ^_~!) accuracy - 8/10 - you caught most of thier personailties perfectly, most of it was on point Style - 10/10 I love the style, perfection in the making! realism - 8/10 it was very believable, i dont know if this would exist in the anime though... Overall - 8.4/10! super terrific! no wonder this got an award, you are very good! i love this work of art! |
| blueMnM415 2005-01-16 ch 10, | abuseRead it, again. Loved it, again. Love all your storys so ill read them again yay! Keep writing. P.S. I recently started writing my own fic((!yay!)) Can you pretty please(with a Togepi on top)help me out with some ideas. Its called An All New Challenge. Please help me ~_~ |
| bluejolteon459 2004-12-26 ch 10, anon. | abuseBeautiful, wonderful, adorable, cute, very fluffy(yay *^_^*) and very well thought out. I like and am very impresed that you thought of using the play and real(Pokemon)life when Ash said what he said to Gary. Now that was brillince. I love your story and hope that i can write like you someday. |
| bluejolteon459 2004-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi I totally love your story so im reading it again. I read your story on the pokemon tower website and it was so good and i thought that it has to be one of the best AAML fanfics EVER!!You have an auwsome story so im going to read it again. |