YAY! I've been waiting for the play, and it turned out great! I loved it! Haha, and I love the part about Misty's bike being here, and then she changes her mind because she can't go on the vacation if she gets the bike. Tee-hee! You should've added Tracey in here, and made some slight handymanshipping (Tracey and Daisy) like you did with Lily and Gary and Violet and Brock (even though it was very slight)! That would've made the story better in my opinion (although that's mainly 'cause I'm a HUGE handymanshipper!) *squee!* Handymanshipping is just too cute, y'know? Yeah, well ANYWAYS, I absolutley LOVED the story! :) It was great!

Pikachu ignored the commotion as he had found the food bar and loaded up Ash's backpack with packets of ketchup. 'I've hit the jackpot'

YEAH! Pikachu's paradise!

"Well I'm not getting you a new bike honey," Ash said in a sweet voice.

"Yes you are sweetheart," Misty said in a even sweeter voice.

"No I'm not darling"

"Yes you are sweety"

"No I'm not love"

'Ugh, this is even worse then before' Pikachu thought as he walked beside Ash.

Awwwww... so cute! But also so NOT Pikachu's paradise.

The ending was a bit too fluffy for me though, not that I didn't like it, which I did, just that there was a bit (just a little bit) too much fluff! But it was still good! I love happy endings!

Buh-bye! :) -KrazyKat101

I loovee this story so so so so very much! But you're being kinda cruel to Misty and Ash! It's so sadd... but I still love the story! I can't wait to see what the play will be! But I don't have to wait long, seeing as this story has only 10 chapters and I'm on chapter 7! Yay! Happy ending in 3 chapters!

"Let me ask you ask you a few questions Gary" Daisy said calmly.

"When is the play supposed to go on?"

"Saturday"

"How many times have we rehearsed the play?"

"None"

"Okay, do you know your lines by heart?"

"No"

"Do you think we will be able to rehearse this play more than once?"

"No"

"Do you understand the point of these questions?"

"No"

"GO PUT ON THE STUPID PUFFY SHIRT!"

Gary startled by this revelation ran as fast as his legs could carry him.

LOL! I laughed so hard I almost died... I loved this part, especially Gary's and Daisy's parts. Oh wait, those are the only parts... *smacks hand onto forehead* Gosh I'm so stupid!

But the end of this chapter was SO SAD! But you promised a happy ending, and you always keep your promises, right? Right? RIGHT? Right. Good. Ta-ta for now!

YES, Finally! Also AWWWWWW! You know the play was kind of like Romeo and Juliet only with a better ending, a much better ending(Sorry if you haven't heard of it or read it, I spoiled the ending for you) Also sorry for my earlier review you are not cruel you are a fanatastic arthur and Pikachu's right their arguments are worse than before thanks for typing this

(sobbing)NOOOOOOOOOOO! nooooo, oh! no offense but you are cruel you know; poor Misty... poor Ash!

All i got to say is "Did anyone order a broken heart, in extra pieces?"

I know how Misty feels...and (Gasp) Misty I like the way you think this chap. is Excellant

I have a six sense for bad things and right now it is going off and so far so good

this is like so...THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ! GREAT JOB WHOEVER WROTE THIS! IT WAZ A BEAUTIFUL STORY!

Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha! Gary is a genious! but poor ash...anyway i so really enjoyed Gary's 'master mind' plan! i was laughing so hard that i would probably fall out of my chair, get hurt, and still be laughing!

Awww Gary is the sweetest! Hes so adorable! I love when he started ranting / So cute!

"I have a great idea. You know what you can do?"

"What, what?" Misty asked desperately.

"Tell him you love him"

haha this is why i love the guy!

"Now get some rest, its after 2 am and we have a play to put on tomorrow. No sister of mine is going to have bags under her eyes at the tender age of 15," Gary said playfully.

awww how anyone not love this guy?

Lol finally i was waiting for an irritat jealous Ash XD

Yah i dont blamy gary for being mad. he's been trying so hard and he got nothing but being blamed at and has to do this!

o...m...g THATS SO EMBARRESING! Poor Ash and Misty XD

1. Deliah and Prof Oak are gonna be gushing at how cute that is and what more embaressing than ur mom watching u makeout with a girl

2. Brock will never let this go!

I cant tell u how much i love this play! This is the best realtionship ever JakeXLuna ALL THE WAY! They are so adorable the play is amazingly cute

Omg first kiss? that sucks! in front of everyone awww..

awww The kiss scene was ujst the sweetest thing in the worl (especially that ash changed his lines ;p) Also ahahahaha Deliah XD

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! WTH ASH AND MISTY? Why would u that on stage? HAHAHAH

ahahahahaa awwww Gary is so cute (me likeing ur sister part)

(lol i was wondering what misty would do when he said that)

ahaha james is silly

uuhhh kind of expect Gary and Liily and its kinda cute (in ur story) but in the show ehhh? i dont like it much but its ncaring of him to come to her rescue

and lol I love Ashs blunt answer "I was in a play"

hahahahah I LOVE THE BIKE SCENE!Poor Ash!

Misty this vacation is how I'm repaying"

"No, you agreed that you would get me a new bike five years ago, no substitutions"

"Well I'm not getting you a new bike honey," Ash said in a sweet voice.

"Yes you are sweetheart," Misty said in a even sweeter voice.

"No I'm not darling"

"Yes you are sweety"

"No I'm not love"

'Ugh, this is even worse then before' Pikachu thought as he walked beside Ash.

"Yes you Mmmppff" Misty was silenced by Ash's lips.

this is my fav part w

NOOOO! Hes gonna get her a bike right? That will crush MistY! Thats like a stab in the hurt

Aww ash sounds so cute!

HAHAHAHHAHA Poor GAry! He has such bad luck!(white shirt part) lol Lily's a little perv XD

Lol aww I bet Gary looks very cute w lol rlly Lily?(her reaction) HAHHAHAHa awwww i love Gary! (his reaction to the laughing and the shirt)

Awww the play is the cutest story I've ever heard! I rlly like it . awww this is the sweetest thing ever! I love Jake so much hes so cute and Luna is so independent!

HAHAHA The irrestable part was so funny! hes trying so hard its very admiring and plus hes slightly cocky attitude and smirk is very charming ;) LOVE HIM! Damn ash is a good acter w

Wow ash is smart (the thing he said about what misty said) that was a rlly smart comeback

AAHH why ash!

Well i Like the story . Its just i think Misty is becoming a bit OCy cuz well shes crying a lot. and if ash did say something like that she would yell at him in a huff she would walk away ya know? She wouldn't have cried and run away. But it was still good w Buutt I LOOVE the little egoshipping u have !it rlly spices things up! AWWWWWWWW Gary is just adorable!

Poor ash T.T

OMG. That was beautiful *sniff. I laughed, I cried, I was happy, I was angry, I was shocked, I was pretty much every emotion that I could think of.

Great Story! Definitely favoriting this.

I rate this 5/5 (It should really be 9e99 for the first number but a calculator can't go that high XD)

I love this story :D

When I first read it, i knew it was pure genuis! :D

way to go Togepretty!

BRILLIANT GRIPPIN XCELLENT AMAZIN TEAR JERKIN AND ALL ROUND AMAZIN