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Marlicat
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
lol
Okay, nice.
Kamai6
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
That's great! Brilliant plot, beautiful description and generally well done!
Keep Writing!
Kamai6
kristy
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
nice job.
IM GONE WITH THE WIND
2009-05-02 . chapter 1
Oh wow, Lily is so odd. But it's an amusing odd - I think so at least.
This was nice. ;)
LaPaige
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
I loved it :D I haven't read a Marauders fic in ages and I'm so glad I have - I love them. To be honest the Maruders fics are my favourite out of all of them. Everyone was in character and it was perfect! You're an awesome writer!
angelofmynightmare
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
Cute story. Being a hair dyer myself, I sympathized with Lily's story of "just wanting a change" so was secretly rooting for her to keep the new color, haha! But this ending is, of course, more appropriate. Keep writing!
-k
.o.O.o.Maraudette.o.O.o.
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
not your best work? yeah. okay. that was really good, and i have to go check your other stuff now. Very nice!
Rob-girl
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
I thought this was very good. Very well-written. I love the idea behind it. Great job.
melissaturkey
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
haha I liked that alot, it was fun. changing her hair had no effect on the way people looked at her, they still looked at her and thought "Lily the redhead" it wasnt somethign she was going to change, but it was funny trying :D melissaturkey
d3pth
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
very interesting...!
harrypotterfan18893
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Um...it was good I guess. I personally didn't like it very much because no offense but it's kinda boring to read about hear. And your Lily is defenitly a bit OCC because I really don't think Lily would swear so much, I just imagined her more good-hearted you know what I mean?? And you're really wishy washy because you sorta beat around the bush, but I guess that's your style. Maybe I'm critical because I just joined the site and stuff but that's just me. I searched Lily and James and this was first. I don't know your other stories but something of more substance might be good...not just hair you know. It was pretty good though. This just shows me the different writing styles that people have though so that's good.
tasha27
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
that was cute! cant wait for more!
Spongyllama
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Well I have to say I prefer your romance fics (including (yes I must say it again) the new one of which I cannot remember the name, sorry) but this was worth reading, I laughed pretty hard at certain parts. And I sort of think Lily is insane, I'm a natural brunette and I'm planning on dying my hair red, so I don't know why she'd stop, but hey, everyone wants a change every once in a while.
JustCallMeDollface
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
umm, well it was a bit longish and drawn out, when i was prepared for short and funny, but other than that it was alright. =]
LiliaGryffindor'sHeir376
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
haha, this story was cute!!

very... profound on James' part, i liked Alice!

great job !

Lilia ~*~
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