Azamiko amd Hana-chan are correct

aw... this was good. you should write another story with them.

Absolutely lovely. Fantastic work.

That was very beautiful. You have the ability to create a fantastic atmosphere, I could imagine all you wrote so vividly... You truly do have a gift with words. Also the relationship between Watanuki and Yûko was so amazingly beautifully potrayed. Sadly there are very few good xHOLiC-fanfics these days, but I can say tha yours was one of the best ones I have ever read. I hope to see more work from you!

Oh. I can totally see this happening in canon. Fabulous work, you do wonders with words.

*grin* Cool.