Do you know what? I think the sound of the Sol Duc River next to the Cullens' house is like a heartbeat and blood circulation for them! I got this overwhelming impression for the first time from your version of the story and seeing Breaking Dawn and that gorgeous house and grounds! I could visualize the scene in Stephanie's books; but the significance of that Sol Duc River never became clearer than reading about it today! What do you think!

I always say this to the numerous writers of Bella and Edward's love story: Bella was God's gift of mercy and forgiveness to Edward and the Cullens because all the Cullens remembered their former human existences and couldn't accept killing other human beings in order to survive themselves. Bella's selfless love and acceptance gave Edward the opportunity to be a sweetheart, a husband and ultimately, a father -without Bella losing any of the human experiences that Edward selflessly couldn't ask Bella to surrender for the sake of loving Edward forever! The rest of the Cullen family won the reward, via Bella, of being aunts, uncles and grandparents to little Renesmee -she's the replacement child none of them had the opportunity to have! Bella was a blessing and Edward realized this completely!

Edward's desperation and triumph over his vampire nature were incredibly real here! What an incredibly beautiful first day and night Bella and Edward just had together! Thanks!

This world-famous chapter was excellently rendered! i got to truly experience some of Edward's precious emotional longings to be viewed as Bella's sweetheart! Bella's trust and judgement of Edward is on-target!

I felt as though I was still hearing Stephanie Meyer's voice of Bella and Edward! Yours is a great fill-in for what I wish Stephanie would finish!I hear the faint traces of Edward's human insecurities and his need for love and acceptance on human terms with Bella.

AWESOME!

I agree with lots of people then, I think that you would make a great job of it. This was really great to read so thank you.

Oh wow absolutely loved it.

That took my breathe away and what a perfect ending. You have done wonders again :-D

I just love how you are getting into the other characters as well. Again keep up the good work.

All I can say to that is that your hard work was well worth it. Again really good work.

I love this, keep up the good work :-D

Wow this is amazing

Excellent

Wow this is really great stuff. I love the whole detaching the cables. I am so engrossed. Looking forward to reading more :-D

Oh my goodness, that was amazing! You have to write New Moon and Breaking Dawn from Edward's perspective, too! I've already read Eclipse from Edward's point of view written by you and it was absolutely brilliant! Please, please, please, write New Moon and Breaking Dawn from Edward's perspective! You are an amazing writer!