Harry Potter too?

I'm sorry to say this but... i've read the first 2 chapters of this story and it is UTHER CRAP. you're completely devoted to dialog, a crappy and sappy kind of dialog.Your descriptions(like only one sentence per chapter)suck badly. When you write a number it MUST be written like "Five" not "5". I don't know where you got your information from but ying and yang can't be separated 'cause every living thing has a balance, and if they lose that balance they cease to exist, and it's not like yang equals good and ying the opposite, there's not really anything there because there MUST be a balance and then the energies become neutral.

Crap. This fic is awsome.

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I saw no mistakes and it was a good read.

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Getting more and more interesting.

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This keeps getting more and more interesting.

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I am loving this one my friend.

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Interesting.

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that was so sweet. :D

With the name thing that's just cruel is this story almost over

I would have had Hinata barf on Naruto after she barfed in the toilet and he told her how happy that made him, that would have been so much better.

This is a great story pal, but I think it would be better if Naruto had more girls, but its still good with just Hinata. Keep up the great work.

Sweet! Naruto got a Keyblade! I'm slightly surpised that you had him chose the shield, but when I continued to read, it all made sence to me. But still, this is getting awesome! It would be cool if he could do the magic too, but I'm only on chapter 4 so I don't know if you added it or not, but either way, I bet this will get really good. :)

I like where this is going.

Awesome story pal! Can't wait to read more. :)