oh god i want to know what going to happen

Please , Please , Please , Please, Update soon x 10 , I want to know what haapens , YOU better not kill her off *Growls* , Well Done And Thanks .

Awwww poor Ellie , Poor Jack , Poor Doctor , Poor Gwen , Poor Ianto , Poor Everyone , LOVED it once again , Really starting to freak me out , Well Done And Thanks .

Ok this is reaaaally starting to freak me out ...Good job I don't normally get freaked about when reading things , Well Done And Thanks .

HaHa LOL , Loved the bit when Jack had to change the baby HILARIOUS , Well Done And Thanks .

I LOVE it , I'm glad Ellie has found happiness , YOU'RE NOT GOING TO KILL HER OFF ARE YOU ? WELL Done And Thanks .

please update again real soon x

Please Please Please Please -goes on for infinity- PLEASE update soon

-gives you a sonic and laser screwdriver cookie- Please :D:D

more plz!

OMG Don't kill Ellie, please it would just be too sad nd it would make Jack go all depressed and then it wouldnt have a happy ending and thats what we need after all this drama in this story update when you can x

i'm enjoying this. the writing is quite good (and such a relief, you see to know your grammar!). the characters' voices are spot on. really quite intriguing and enjoyable. i look forward to more. nice work.

Ok so this counts as..er...one big review since i havent reviewed in a while. The characters are spot on with what they say. Sounds just like them. Good idea calling the clone doctor John other wise things would get way to confusing. You sure as hell know how to write a cliffhanger thats what makes them come back for more. The Master seemed to be getting darker then ever and then he shows loving emotion a one point. interesting...ofcause he does go back to being dark after that so...you know. But the big question is...will Ellie live? You're doing a great job and maybe one day we will see somthing like this on TV by the BBC...who knows ;)

You can't seriously kill Ellie can you? I mean, come on, imagine how emo that's going to make Jack! He's gonna kill himself like fifty thousand times! And that's just not good cause he would probably find a way to kill himself in a different way each time!

I hope this review makes you write faster...and not kill Ellie...please don't kill Ellie *puppy dog eyes* Please?

I love your Master/Ellie stories, sometimes they are very dark but The Master is a very dark character so it fits with the story very well. I look forward to reading the rest of this story, keep up the good work!

Thanks :)

Please don't kill Ellie, it will be too sad.

Up date soon please :) xx