Great story, I love happy endings! I lurved the car smex scene! XD

Poor Namine and Axel! I feel bad for Namine because of obvious reasons, and for Axel, because he was used by Roxas, even if it turned out alright in the end!

This Roxas was pretty sneaky and kind of cruel, but I loved the way Axel was portrayed in this story, he's so sweet!

I normally like Reno, but I hated him in this story, sleeping with kids ten years younger than him, at least he went to prison!

i love it i had a few tears in my eye

man i am going to read this again and agian

thanks

Aw, cute and sad.

And that its based ona true story makes it all the better.

Great job.

aw so sad :[ but i like it

wow

pretty interesting...

:D i like the touch of mystery you put on it and the drama.

I just wanted to say again. Sorry for falling asleep on you D: but at least you got to write this! It was really good and before I knew what Roxas' plan was I was like...Reno is striaght? That's a first. lol

Wow, I hadn't realized this was based on a slightly true story, but that usually makes stories like this work out and intice people into read them; I enjoyed the twist point of Reno threatening to kill the one who had Roxas cheat on him, when all along the one he has the hate towards was standing right in front of him

Very well written