God, I read the description and I heard Damien Rice in my head for the first time in a long time. >.< I was practically in tears before I even started reading.

If you ever get a chance, listen to these three songs in this order: (1) I Remember, (2) Cheers Darlin', (3) Prague

And see if you get drift of the story in those songs (there's a sad progression, if you ask me).

Usually I don't like it when people reference songs in stories, but perhaps that's because I usually haven't heard the songs before reading and can't really get into the mode of feel that makes the tune and the story so right alongside one another.

Really, nice job mate.

In my humble opinion this was a great start! My first ever Torchwood FF and I like it a ton ^-^

A lot of fun to read. Thankyou.