You really do have writing skills. This will be good. I really like the way you realisticlly portray Tara's emotions. I would probably think i was going crazy too. Can't wait for more but i will if i have to.

Oh I love this! Continue!

Why aren't you writing a novel. You are amazing. This storie is so awesome. I love Okage and i think what you've done to this is amazing. Please do continue. I'm hooked.

nice... i would like to see the rest of the story!