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Ceridwen Kalamack
2009-02-14 . chapter 5
Great story. Ranma and Nabiki are so cute. But why not update?
QundraDraconum
2008-01-15 . chapter 5
I like it. It's rare to see a softer side of Nabiki.
KeiG
2007-05-02 . chapter 5
Hi there! This is a really great story you have here. I like Ranma and Nabiki matchups, and I think you've explained pretty well why Nabiki's acting OOC. Good job!

I really hope you finish this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
dennisud
2007-03-19 . chapter 5
Nicely done! I hope this continues as its a prequel.

dennsiud
Radde
2006-10-31 . chapter 5
wow ..that sure is a nice story!
I'd like you to continue it... I like how you chanced Nabikis character... she seems much more "femine" now..

so i'd apreciate it if you'd contact me when you updated your next chappy ^^

Radde
Dumbledork
2006-04-06 . chapter 5
Nice stroy. I'd like to read more.
ron
2005-09-09 . chapter 5
great fic, hope you update really soon
Dassadec
2005-02-14 . chapter 2
Yipee! I get a cookie!
merlyn ang
2005-02-06 . chapter 3
i love the story! pls. continue it co'z theres a lot of nabiki/ranma readers like me who love them to be paired up. keep up the good work and more power to you!
CuriousDreamWeaver
2005-01-04 . chapter 5
Nice fic! I think it's interesting. Poor Nabiki, those other girls really don't know how to control themselves, do they? Please write more.
^_~
DreamWeaver
Raver
2004-12-13 . chapter 5
I like this a lot, mostly the romance(i'm a sucker for it), but the priest is fantastic. keep up the good work!
Six-string Samurai
2004-12-07 . chapter 5
Hoo, this one felt a little short, but that's ok as long as a new one is ready in the near future. Hint-hint. ;)
Six-string Samurai
2004-12-07 . chapter 4
...'The old man said you could where these since your clothes got trashed'...this part in the note Ranma wrote should be "wear," not "where". ;)

...'“I gave you and instruction Mr. Saotome.”'...should be "an," not "and".

Actually, I think those were the only major grammar mistakes in this chapter that I could catch upon first reading. Loved the scene in the bath by the way. Good setup.
Six-string Samurai
2004-12-07 . chapter 3
I'm of like mind with one of the earlier reviewers. The fiancees were fairly IC given the circumstances and the fact that the reader isn't given the exact details of the 'date' that was circulated through the rumor mill.

Good stuff. Look forward to reading the rest.
the verve
2004-11-02 . chapter 5
hahaha hey this storys rocks :) I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update!
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