Nice freakin fanfic.

I really liked it it explains alot

Nice freakin fanfic.

This is rally good, the characters are all in character, but I found something that contridicts to the game itself. Vivi's grandpa gave Vivi the ticket, unless Quan(Vivi's grandpa) is really the spirit!

An interesting theme. I look to seeing more of this one.

Though not at present, I would like to know the nature of this other-world being, either by hint or dint toward the end. Call me crazy like that, but... :P

Keep 'em coming!