I just have some questions. Who is Sofia? Is she going to be the narrator for the whole story? I guess she is also a vampire but how is she related to the Cullens. And dose Bella reality not like her or has she not gotting to know her. Is Bella a vampire? Is it like a continuation of breaking dawn or are you starting some thing new.

I'm really glad that I went back and read this version. It really gave me so much more insight into Mr. Wonderful. Hahaha. I'm not totally confused anymore. ;]

I am still totally in love with your Sofia and Edward, no matter how monster-y they are. I love how you wrote Edward and I really don't think I've ever liked an OC as much as I love Sofia.

Thank you for being a totally amazing author. :]

I love this story so much. I know that you're not suppose to root for Edward and Sofie but I do anyways maybe it's because I hate Bella. It is so hard to find stories with Edward without Bella.

I have to say a very interesting read - I couldn't stop. And something I've not really seen much of in the fandom.

I followed a rec from the fictionators and I hope that gets you a whole lot more readers!

WOW! I just caught up to this beast because of school shit getting in my way, but wow! Having a kid and "the accident" with Bella and Jacob, and Chicago and just...

Certainly the most awesome non-EdwardxBella story I've read, and Sofia is just a trip. :) Thanks so much for this awesome gem!

Thanks for clearing all sorts of little questions up for me. It was interesting to see what didn't make the cut. Thanks for writing. :D

I love reading outtakes and thought processes like this. I wish every author published them. Thank you so much for sharing them.

Damn woman. Once again you blow me away. I am amazed at how in depth, and how much I agree with you about SM's characters. I am standing right in line with you on the confuzzlement.

I can't wait for TAatGEB! Smooches & Assgrabs!

BwaHaHaHa. You killed off BF and the dog. I love it. I was hoping to get closure on those two. )

(Oh, the rooftop sexin'? HOT.)

*sniff. Gonna miss these guys.

Holy Christ. I had never heard of sewing a cervix shut until now. ::shudder:: It sounds horribly uncomfortable.

Glad they got teh bebe Anthony out and all is well.

Looking forward to the new stories and the outtakes!

I love that you ended this from Nessie's POV. And that Jake & Bella bite it.

Love (eleventy billion).

Ugh, I so don't want this to be over!

I'm glad you're doing some outtakes, I'd like to see a little Seth outtake! Pretty Pleze?

You know you want to do one. Don't make me use the force on you.

Isn't it weird to be so close to done? Like being a week before your due date... and thanks for the shout out there. I respect that you've taken all the shit I've had to dish out, good and bad. You always take it like a lady!

(“Oh holy Mother of All Saints, oh God, Sookie Fucking Stackhouse, oh Sweet Jailbait on a Bike...YES!”)

Oh god, you should have a warning on this for mothers to read carefully. This shit is fucking scary. I have tears in my eyes.

Gah, that text speak was hard to read. Maybe I'm too old or something but my brain takes 10 times longer to make sense of it than plain English. Don't tell my students. It makes em think I'm a moron.

HAHA, I'm cracking up at the sexiest lemon ever written here: "You okay?" "I'm FINE, just hurry up and cum already." I bet there are idealistic, young people out there who think they'll never say those words. ;)

Oh god, I can't tell you how relieved I am that you didn't have them decide to toss out Ness because they finally had their own. I mean, I know they both love her; you made that so clear. But still. I guess I was just scared for her anyway. Sometimes the dark and twisted things they did in this story made me angry and sad, and I couldn't know how far they'd go. And oh yeah, glad Carlisle is safe, too. Him? I was not so scared for, though I'm still glad he gets to live. Ha!

Can't wait for the epilogue. Congratulations. :)

First review on EVAH and it's all for you! Loved, loved, LOVED the story, and the end was unreal. I was interested by your inclusion of Carlisle in a big way and I think it really added to it. Thinking it might be good fodder to go in a different direction: what would have happened if C. had an issue with them leaving, could be interesting! Anyway, you know I'm a fan and will always read what you've written - a big MWAH and congrats for finishing a great piece of work!

Wow oh wow. What a great ending! I was worried for Sofia and the baby for a little bit but the delivery went well. Sorry to see this ending but I know you've got more fun stuff planned in other stories for me. Thanks for writing!