Wow. That was really interesting. You did a good job with each of the characters. But it was pretty depressing :p. Oh well, a good read is a good read.

Oh wow.

That was really great. You got a few laughs out of me (that variation on "curiosity kills the cat" was particularly cute), but that ending...I felt so bad for the both of them. ;_;

In any case, this was really well-written and I really hope you decide to take another prompt. :)