Really great fic! I liked the AU concept you established. Every detail [about the 20's and the Italian language] was well thought out and accurate, and the [alternate] characters still conformed somewhat to those in the original plot (naturally, with a historical twist). I also liked the little details, like "The Silvana Limousine" company, and the "Horizon Cave" speakeasy. It's details and minutia like this that really make a great fic.

This is probably one of the most original Last Exile fics I've read yet. It's actually AU!

The whole thing was cute, and I liked how you put in all the little details to prove they were actually in the right time period. (I also liked Lucciola and Dio's little interactions - it was cute...)

I like the history and the romance.