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Turtle Kid
2009-11-19 . chapter 14
. . . Well, I'm going to imagine that Dio and Luciola make it out at least alright from the Black Depression--I mean, without dying or getting really sick or anything, even if they have a rough time of it.

So many details! I feel better, knowing a bit more about the past, even if it is about refrigerators and instant coffee. Those kinds of things are interesting!

It's hard to believe this all, barring the part where Luciola is eight-years-old, took place in less than a month.

Thanks for writing! I enjoyed reading this story!
Kajou Takumi
2009-08-17 . chapter 14
Really great fic! I liked the AU concept you established. Every detail [about the 20's and the Italian language] was well thought out and accurate, and the [alternate] characters still conformed somewhat to those in the original plot (naturally, with a historical twist). I also liked the little details, like "The Silvana Limousine" company, and the "Horizon Cave" speakeasy. It's details and minutia like this that really make a great fic.
Insomniac Owl
2009-06-03 . chapter 14
This is probably one of the most original Last Exile fics I've read yet. It's actually AU!

The whole thing was cute, and I liked how you put in all the little details to prove they were actually in the right time period. (I also liked Lucciola and Dio's little interactions - it was cute...)
Turtle Kid
2009-04-20 . chapter 11
I like the history and the romance.
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