You should write more! I love your firt chapter!

I think it's nice! please continue. it needs a bit lines and dialogues though. but great job :D Read my fanfict too, please :D

This was so cute.

Love the plot! Please write more!

very good *-*

Try to put some dialogue into it, but besides that great job!

please write about their honeymoon!

sad

but a SWEET honey moon would fix it!

Could definitely use much more dialogue. If I'm not wrong, the only sentence spoken in your entire fic is from Becky's mum?

Other than that, a little bland but still quite readable and pleasant. A honeymoon would be nice xD

Aw! Cute!