bice!

Hot and Intrigating in a an awkward but sweet way.

HOTHOTHOt

my god

sexy and scary...WOW

Good story. Definite fun. the end made me laugh a bit.

so did the murderer actually attack greg?

loved this though, it was sweet!

SNORTS love it well done!

I loved it! Very well done! I liked how you gave just enough hints to make it clear that Greg was dreaming without making it too dream-like. And I liked how different dream-Nick and real-Nick were. Yay for you!

Wonderful, especially the use of your imagery. I could imagine everything -- EVERYTHING -- and it was great. Just perfect, no criticism here whatsoever. I always love your stuff.

This is dirty...in a good way. I love this line, “It’s a fucking corn field,” Greg snapped. “How thoroughly can you search it?”. Great Line and great story.

Well, that was rather hot now, wasn't it ;-)?

I really liked your description of an old Greg thinking of Nick. That was incredibly sweet.

Oh, and did I mention how hot your story was? Well done!

Very hot and creepy. That's quite the combination. So Greg has a kink for graveyards? For some reason, I find the idea of sex on a grave to be...intriguing. Not my grave though. No no no. It was very enjoyable.