loved whole thing except ending - needs some more work

I am VERY dissapointed with the ending! The reader doesn't even get to know why his father wanted him in the first place. Tony doesn't have to retire; you should just lengthen it out a little more before they bring down Dominic. Add more drama and suspense. Sorry to be hard, but you wrote such an amazing story, but didn't have an amazing ending.

omg i could hit his dad! how dare he hit my tony!!
loved the story <3

good story are you going to wright more to it

OMG TONY! I loved the storie ♥ 10/10! Thank gosh Tony is safe now. But I always thought Tony was abused as a child. Make's sense aye? lol.

again, i loved it. Well done :D

Peace.
~VivaLaTiva~

loved it:)

loved the story but the ending was way to quick
their where a lot of possibilities to be had

The ending was a bit disappointing. Why did his father want him back?

good start. though i don't see Gibbs actually letting Tony quit. can't wait to see where you take it from here!

wtf?

Good start. interesting setup, and then, nothing...

wierd

geoff

keep up the great work.

great story! poor Tony... can't wait for more :)

Good story. I'm Looking forward to more chapters. My only suggestion with these type of stories is always have the victim, beat the bad guy. Have Tony win, in the battle against his father. Gibbs and the team can fight with Tony, but not for him.

NOO! Tony can't resing! Please update soon! I can't wait to see how Gibbs reacts to Tony's resignation.

Fight back, Tony!