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Koolneko22
2009-11-28 . chapter 5
Great story. I really liked it. I hope you write a lot more!
anniesmom
2009-07-08 . chapter 5
What a surprise to see the end of this story. I didn't think you had updated yet. Wow I loved the ending. I just love your writing. Just to let you know I still have not gotten the book but sometimes when you mail a book it takes forever and a day.

Anyway, hope you are feeling better and are up and about. Hope to hear from you soon.
Etha M.R.
2009-06-29 . chapter 5
Good job Muffy, really nice ending. I wonder if you would write a sequel? To fix some problems I thought haven't finished yet, like the Demon and all...

However, it's really nice ending (I think I'd write it once? Oh yeah, rite ^_^).
charis-kalos
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
Ooh, good ending. But now I'm starting to wonder. You've got me convinced that in this world the world Dean (and we) know was an illusion - but what if it wasn't? What of this world, with nun Ruby and monk Cas and Azazel still out there, is the illusion? A way of taking Dean out of the apocalypse? Or maybe both worlds are real; just alternatives? Maybe it's because I've been reading too many X-Men comics recently, but I'm really pondering the nature of alternate realities.

Anyway, I really enjoyed this and I'm glad this particular story in this particualr world has a happy ending, even if the demon is still out there and Dean is still suffering from his memories. Sam and Dean are back to being ** and Jerk and that's a happy enough ending for me.
OcherMe
2009-06-25 . chapter 5
Awe...loved how you ended it :) Great story!
TheKritty
2009-06-24 . chapter 5
Aw, I love that story! What an idea! It brought the weirdest thought into my head(-what if the complete storyline of sn is just a dream Sam has in the pilot, sleeping next to Jessica *lol*)

Man, I felt so sorry for Dean...these alternative reality with the false Sam was his personal hell, and then he was in the real hell (well, not really...but in this alternative reality^^) and then he came back and...it's just like the real reunion, Dean has to deal with the aftermath of his hell and real hell...(that sounds weird, hope you get what I mean^.^)...so he has memories of 42 years... -.-' That's just cruel and my heart hurts for Dean. Sam cared/s so well for his big brother (holy **, nine month!) ...

Unfortunately, this story had to end now, but I'm hoping that there will be another one related to this one *lol*

Great work, really! Kritty
supernatfem76
2009-06-23 . chapter 5
Seeing Ruby and Castiel as a nun and monk was very amusing but it was also interesting to see how different their relationship was with Sam in this alternate universe compared to that in Season 4. I liked how you used Season 4 in your story as Dean's dream world. That was a stroke of genius. I liked your word choice throughout this last chapter along with all of your brotherly moments. Great job writing the fight scene between Sam and the Djinn and the reunion of Sam and Bobby with Dean. This was an excellent ending to an very interesting story.
Nana56
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
And so it ends, with the brothers back together and all of that yucky stuff having never happened. Woohoo! Loved it. Great job, sis! Well done!
Charlie Girl 79
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
Great story, all twisty and turny and in places confusing as hell...no wait that was the work of the djinn. get job!
Shar
sunnyjunedays
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
Hi, I will never complain about the length of a chapter of your stories, because in honesty they rarely seem long enough, (that is not a critisism) it seems that no sooner than i begin reading i reach the end, that is how much i love your writing and this one was no exception. Great ending, just brilliant. Loved it, thanks. x
mtee1958
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
Good story, although I admit to thinking you were going to leave us with something sinister -- a double twisted ending -- like Ruby watching from the window and her eyes turn black.

Thanks so much.
jensengirl4eva
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
Great ending...
spootycup
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
wow... really really great... loved it... just wonderful...
drkstormynite
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
Wow. Thanks for such a great read!!

So happy to have you back Muffy! Hope you are feeling better every day and on your way back to 100%! :)

Looking forward to more of your amazing stories.
Thanks again!
Big hugs!
sayrae3times
2009-06-21 . chapter 5
Excellent finish, my friend. I'm sad to see it over!
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