 naruhina pwns 2009-09-05 . chapter 3cute! |
 Kasuchi, Koichi 2009-06-27 . chapter 3 The fact that Naruto seems to be related to Gaara, Temari, Kankuro, and Tayuya is awesome. Keep it up. |
 StarfireGreencoon 2009-06-11 . chapter 3GReat story |
 goku90504 2009-06-10 . chapter 3you do know the clan restoration act is not cannon don't you? just saying it's an over used plot device by fanfiction writers
and I've seen a few versions of it the version i find that would make the most sense with the kind of place konoha is supposed to be is that people like naruto or cannon sasuke are allowed to but not forced to marry multiple girls as long as the girls agree |
 JNottle 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Cool so far.
As for stuff please don't do much bashing.
Also, Kakashi should make an entrance! |
 Diamond1984 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Keep going. I want to read more. |
 Dragon Man 180 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Nice chapter, very nice. I can just see the Hyuuga elders hearing the news of Naruto's mastered techniques and thinking, "Do we really want him ** off at us, especially if he later learns the truth of the Caged Bird seal?" I hope Hinata doesn't get the seal! |
 Rose Tiger 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Ooh! Hinata will be Naruto's bride!! Sweet! Keep going!! |
 the DragonBard 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Where did you get the idea that the caged bird seal prevents children from getting the Byakkugan? Hizashi had the seal, and Neji inherited the Byakkugan (obviously) so it doesn't seem to prevent the Byakkugan from being inherited by their children. Also, if it 'did' prevent the inheritance of the Byakkugan, there would be fewer Hyuuga I think than is shown in canon. |
 Kasuchi, Koichi 2009-05-22 . chapter 2 All I can say is don’t make Naruto too powerful. If he always wins then he’ll become arrogant like the Uchiha-teme. Other than that, keep up the great work and get to the NaruHina. |
 BYoshi1993 2009-04-19 . chapter 2Although it is short, I really like it and look forward to your next update, so please do so again as soon as you can.
-Michael |
 RANMACAT 2009-04-07 . chapter 2please up date please please please. |
 HarrySlytherinson 2009-03-24 . chapter 2please update sooN! |
 Celestial Indigo 2009-03-19 . chapter 2Great chapter. Nice to see mommy and shadow-daddy back in the mix.
Can't wait to see what else happens, but keep in mind, overpowering a character can kill a fic.
Lookin' forward to your next chapter. |
 kyuubilord 2009-03-19 . chapter 2so what happens if the minato clone gets dispelled |