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naruhina pwns
2009-09-05 . chapter 3
cute!
Kasuchi, Koichi
2009-06-27 . chapter 3
The fact that Naruto seems to be related to Gaara, Temari, Kankuro, and Tayuya is awesome. Keep it up.
StarfireGreencoon
2009-06-11 . chapter 3
GReat story
goku90504
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
you do know the clan restoration act is not cannon don't you? just saying it's an over used plot device by fanfiction writers

and I've seen a few versions of it the version i find that would make the most sense with the kind of place konoha is supposed to be is that people like naruto or cannon sasuke are allowed to but not forced to marry multiple girls as long as the girls agree
JNottle
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Cool so far.

As for stuff please don't do much bashing.

Also, Kakashi should make an entrance!
Diamond1984
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Keep going. I want to read more.
Dragon Man 180
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Nice chapter, very nice. I can just see the Hyuuga elders hearing the news of Naruto's mastered techniques and thinking, "Do we really want him ** off at us, especially if he later learns the truth of the Caged Bird seal?" I hope Hinata doesn't get the seal!
Rose Tiger
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Ooh! Hinata will be Naruto's bride!! Sweet! Keep going!!
the DragonBard
2009-06-10 . chapter 3
Where did you get the idea that the caged bird seal prevents children from getting the Byakkugan? Hizashi had the seal, and Neji inherited the Byakkugan (obviously) so it doesn't seem to prevent the Byakkugan from being inherited by their children. Also, if it 'did' prevent the inheritance of the Byakkugan, there would be fewer Hyuuga I think than is shown in canon.
Kasuchi, Koichi
2009-05-22 . chapter 2
All I can say is don’t make Naruto too powerful. If he always wins then he’ll become arrogant like the Uchiha-teme. Other than that, keep up the great work and get to the NaruHina.
BYoshi1993
2009-04-19 . chapter 2
Although it is short, I really like it and look forward to your next update, so please do so again as soon as you can.

-Michael
RANMACAT
2009-04-07 . chapter 2
please up date please please please.
HarrySlytherinson
2009-03-24 . chapter 2
please update sooN!
Celestial Indigo
2009-03-19 . chapter 2
Great chapter. Nice to see mommy and shadow-daddy back in the mix.

Can't wait to see what else happens, but keep in mind, overpowering a character can kill a fic.

Lookin' forward to your next chapter.
kyuubilord
2009-03-19 . chapter 2
so what happens if the minato clone gets dispelled
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