Alex does have a very filthy mind. Loved it!

lmao - I laughed so much at the 'ebay' bit! hilarious
Nell

This was wonderful. Very funny. Your writing is fantastic!

Great little story. My favourite line has to be "slamming his hand on the keyboard, causing it to bleep a way that was almost satisfying. Sounded like the bloody thing was in pain and in his opinion it more than deserved it." It made me giggle. Looking forward to future posts.

I liked it. :) I love the tension between Gene and Alex and you portrayed it very well.

Haha, marvelous!
That was fun, and I love your ending.
Sarah

Great stuff, funny and believable!

Oh I loved this when I read it on LJ...fantastic work!

Gem x

I love the idea of Alex winding Gene up by trying to explain computers and the internet to him. The line that really made me laugh out loud was "slamming his hand on the keyboard, causing it to bleep a way that was almost satisfying. Sounded like the bloody thing was in pain and in his opinion it more than deserved it.". Haven't we all felt like that about our PCs at some time? And the idea that eBay is "absolutely filthy"! (Naughty, Alex, naughty). Great fun!