|Reviews for Snapped|
| Gemma-Rose-628 2/24/10 . chapter 1
heh, nice work with the multiple meanings of "snapped" for some reason I find it near impossible to refer to Mustang by his first name, wonder why...
| The2nd 8/5/09 . chapter 1
Good piece, nice job of flushing out that chapter (not that it isn't perfectly fine as is). I agree 93, 94, and 95 are some of my favorite chapters.
| Miss Fish 4/2/09 . chapter 1
I agree- this was a very epic chapter! One of my favorites so far, I'd even say.
So I am so glad that someone did a oneshot of it! Thank you!
| Aviantei 3/20/09 . chapter 1
Good job. Continue to use that english nerd inside of you. It may become useful over time...
| Melody Elric 3/18/09 . chapter 1
| Orange Singer 3/16/09 . chapter 1
Nice job! In my opinion, I believe you should have left out the entire piece up to "He remembered that people often remarked that revenge was a dish best served cold...," because all the happenings in that section have already been published by Arakawa, so we already know what happened. This would be a lovely drabble from that point out. I do, however, love the line, "...Fullmetal had been blown a good twenty feet across the room." That made me laugh! Just constructive criticism! I love your writing style. Nice job! I can't wait for the next chapter...Gawd, I was so PISSED at Envy! My gut just sank when he transformed into a Gracia with THAT disgusting grin...*shudder*
| Kalez Photography 3/16/09 . chapter 1
This is awesome. GO ROY! WEWT!
One spelling error that I saw:
'And suddenly Enjoy was gone, replaced with Gracia.'
Should Enjoy be Envy?
| HackedAt 3/16/09 . chapter 1
I loved this! Your description is spot-on. And I also enjoyed the actual Manga chapter. :D it was so .