heh, nice work with the multiple meanings of "snapped" for some reason I find it near impossible to refer to Mustang by his first name, wonder why...

Good piece, nice job of flushing out that chapter (not that it isn't perfectly fine as is). I agree 93, 94, and 95 are some of my favorite chapters.

I agree- this was a very epic chapter! One of my favorites so far, I'd even say.

So I am so glad that someone did a oneshot of it! Thank you!

Good job. Continue to use that english nerd inside of you. It may become useful over time...

GREAT JOB!

Nice job! In my opinion, I believe you should have left out the entire piece up to "He remembered that people often remarked that revenge was a dish best served cold...," because all the happenings in that section have already been published by Arakawa, so we already know what happened. This would be a lovely drabble from that point out. I do, however, love the line, "...Fullmetal had been blown a good twenty feet across the room." That made me laugh! Just constructive criticism! I love your writing style. Nice job! I can't wait for the next chapter...Gawd, I was so PISSED at Envy! My gut just sank when he transformed into a Gracia with THAT disgusting grin...*shudder*

This is awesome. GO ROY! WEWT!

One spelling error that I saw:

'And suddenly Enjoy was gone, replaced with Gracia.'

Should Enjoy be Envy?

I loved this! Your description is spot-on. And I also enjoyed the actual Manga chapter. :D it was so .