Very good story.. Excellent writing...

you know,a while back, I made up something that had a cat with falcon wings on it.. called it a falconcat.. What was Neko supposed to be cursed? a catduck?

I think you have aded just the right amont of action, humor, and complity to the story so far. I also like the plot so far, great work.!

Though at a few places iI got a little confused who was talking, it is really good..!

I love your work and imagination, I will read more tomorrow..!

A-chan

As I said in my previous review, an excellent story. My previous comment is the ONLY thing I found fault with at all, so stand proud, it ain't that common it happens.

I like your story, but I have one (very) minor complaint: Ranma doesn't always think things through too well, and I know he likes to keep his curse under wraps whenever possible, but surely he's smart enough to realize that Neko will have to know, sooner or later, considering that she is staying in the Nekohanten with three other people who know of the curse and have no reason to hide it, especially after Akane let the "Jusenkyo" comment slip.

But as I said, that is a very minor thing. The story is otherwise excellent.

aww..good fic. very good fic.

This was a really really really good fic. It was sooooooo good (have I made my point yet? Lol). I know you said you wouldn't write a seqeul...but could you? Or do something, bring back Neko. I liked her. I'm glad she and Shampoo worked it out in the end.

Waaaaaaai! Sugoi ne! Kawaii desu! Excellent story, Lunie-chan!

This was a really good fic. I'd like to read more on this one-please do a sequel but make it using Neko and expand on Ranma & Akane's new feelings towards each other. Also, I'd really like to read your new fic Romance in Ryugenzawa.